Aswecanseeeveryday,moreandmoreparentsarepickingtheirchildrenupafterschool,andwhatcomesalongisthephenomenonthatmoreandmorecarsaregatheringaroundourschoolgate,whichofcoursehascausedalotoftrafficpressure.What'smore,someofthestudents'notobservingthetafficrulesalsobecomesoneofthewellreasonsthatresultintheterribletraffitjam.Inaddition,thegovernmentshouldbeequallyblamedforthierneglectingtheconstructionofnecessarytrafficlights,whichundoubtfullyleavesconsiderablesafetyproblemsremainingtobesettled.
AstheinternationalconferenceonclimateconcludedinCopenhagen,everyoneofusshouldalsomakeitourdutytoleadalow-carbonlifeandprotectourenvironment.Aslittleathingaswalkingtoschoolcanevenhelp,whichwillaccordinglycontributetoreliefingthetrafficjamoutsideourschoolgate.Isitbeyondourreach?
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