Awomanwastakentothehospital．Whilehavinganoperation，shehada nearly

　　                                                                                                             near

　　deathexperience．SeeingGod，sheaskedhowthiswasit．Godsaid，"No，you had

　　                                                           if/whether                                            have

　　another40years．"Onrecoverythewomendecidedtohaveaplasticsurgery．Shehad

　　                                                      woman

　　someonechangeherhaircolor，thinkingsinceshehadsomanytimetolive，she'd

　　                                                                                   much

　　bettermakefullusefromit．Finallyshegotoutofthehospital．Whilecrossingthe

　　                              of

　　street，she∧killedbyanambulance speededby．ArrivinginthefrontofGod，

　　               加was                             speeding                       去掉

　　shedemanded，"TheysaidIhadanother40years!"Godreplied，"ButIdidn't

　　                          You

　　recognizeyou．"

　　1．nearly改为near．短语搭配，aneardeathexperience濒临死亡的体验．

　　2．how改为if/whether．题干是宾语从句，句意表达是否，不是表示程度．

　　3．had改为have．直接引语中表示说话当时的情况，要用一般现在时态．

　　4．women改为woman．文章讲述的是一位女士，要用单数．

　　5．many改为much．题干修饰的是时间time，不可数名词，要用much来修饰．

　　6．from改为of．短语搭配，makefulluseof充分利用．

　　7．加was．句意表达的是被动，要加be动词．

　　8．speeded改为speeding．题干中speed是作ambulance的后置定语，表达主动关系，要用现在分词．

　　9．the去掉．infrontof是外部的前面，inthefrontof是内部的前面．

　　10．they改为you．逻辑错误，句意是用来指代上帝，应该是you．