【哪位大侠帮我看看这篇英语小日记有没有语法错误看看哪里错了,高三水平的.如果能润色一下,NowcomingthefirstholidaysinceIwenttocollege,thesixmonthsofcollegelifewasmyfirsttripawayfromhometostudya】

　　哪位大侠帮我看看这篇英语小日记有没有语法错误

　　看看哪里错了,高三水平的.如果能润色一下,

　　NowcomingthefirstholidaysinceIwenttocollege,thesixmonthsofcollegelifewasmyfirsttripawayfromhometostudyallbymyself.

　　Sixmonthsofcollegelifehavetaughtmealot,SothisiswhatIdreamofuniversitylife,therewerefaintsenseofloss,buttherearemoresurprises,I'vemetalotofnewfriends,andIhasalsoexperiencedalotofimpressivethings.Nowgohome,IwouldliketobeproperlychatwithmyparentsthelifeIhavesixmonthsIhavebeenliving.