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　　看看他写的小日记里有没有语法错误.哎,我这当妈的英语都扔了20年了.TodayisaSunday.Itisveryhot.MymotherandIaregoingtoabookshop.Therearesomebooksinthebookshop.Ilikeinterestingbooks.SoIwanttobuysomein

　　看看他写的小日记里有没有语法错误.哎,我这当妈的英语都扔了20年了.

　　TodayisaSunday.Itisveryhot.MymotherandIaregoingtoabookshop.Therearesomebooksinthebookshop.Ilikeinterestingbooks.SoIwanttobuysomeinterestingbooks.Ilikereadingit.Butafteranhour.Iamverytiredandthirsty.Then,Iamsittingonthechair.Mumaskme"Whatisthematterwithyou?""Iamverythirsty.Iwantsomewater.""Wahtdoyoulike?Thereissomewater,somejuice,somecaffeeandsometeaonthetable.Whatdoyouwant?""Iwantabottleofjuice.Becauseitisverysweet."Somymotherisgivingbuyabottleofjuiceforme.Iamveryhappy.Iamdrinkingthejuice.

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　　TodayisaSunday.(去掉a)Itisveryhot.MymotherandIaregoingto

　　（aregoingto改成went,用过去式）abookshop.Therearesomebooksinthebookshop.Ilikeinterestingbooks.

　　（该句改为Ilikereadingbooks或I'minterestedinbooks)SoIwanttobuysomeinterestingbooks.Ilikereadingit.

　　(it改为them,不然文章前后不一致）Butafteranhour.Iamverytiredandthirsty.Then,Iamsittingonthechair.Mumask

　　（ask改为asked)me"Whatisthematterwithyou?""Iamverythirsty.Iwantsomewater.""Waht

　　(What)doyoulike?Thereissomewater,somejuice,somecaffeeandsometeaonthetable.Whatdoyouwant?""Iwantabottleofjuice.Becauseitisverysweet."Somymotherisgivingbuy（?isgivingbuy怎么两个动词,直接用bought就好了）abottleofjuiceforme.Iamveryhappy.Iamdrinkingthejuice.

　　日记的时态应该用一般过去式,文章时态错误.但小孩能写成这样已经不错了,句子整体的结构都很完整.

2020-04-22 21:10:00

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