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  请问这篇短剧有何语法上的漏洞!WalrusJoinsIn海象参加表演Narrator:EveryoneattheNorthPolewasveryexcited.Therewasgoingtobeashowandanyonecouldbeinit.ArcticFox:Iwilldoskating,I’mgoodatthat!PolarBear:

  请问这篇短剧有何语法上的漏洞!

  WalrusJoinsIn海象参加表演

  Narrator:EveryoneattheNorthPolewasveryexcited.Therewasgoingtobeashowandanyonecouldbeinit.

  ArcticFox:Iwilldoskating,I’mgoodatthat!

  PolarBear:I’lldotumbling,noonetumblesquitelikeme!

  Seal:I’lldosinging,everyonesaysIhaveaveryfinevoice!

  Whale:ThenI’lldodiving.Iwonaprizefordivingatschool,youknow.

  ArcticFox,PolarBear,Seal,Whale:(AskedtoWalrus)Whatwillyoudo?

  Walrus:(Fellveryunhappy,triedtocry)Ican’tdoanything.

  ArcticFox:Nevermind,youcanwatchus.

  Walrus:(Hidbehindasnowdrift,speaksadlyandquietly)WhyIcandonothing?

  Narrator:Atlast,thebigshowarrived.

  ArcticFox:(Skateforwardsandbackwardsandsideways)

  Walrus:(LeapontotheiceandjoininwithFox)Icanskate,lookatme!

  Narrator:ButWalruscouldn’tskateatall.Hecouldonlytripupandfallover.HebumpedintoFox,andFoxwentflatonherface.

  ArcticFox:(Upset)Walrushasruinedmyact.

  PolarBear:(Jumpandspinandsomersaultandstandonhishand)

  Walrus:(Leapontotheice)Icantumbletoo,lookatme!

  Narrator:ButWalruscouldn’ttumbleatall.Hecouldonlytripupandfallover.HetrippedupPolarBear.

  PolarBear:(Angry)Walrushasruinedmyact.

  Seal:O,howmyheartrejoiceswhenIseetheNorthernLights.Myearisfilledwithvoicessweetlysinginginthenight!(Singingbeautifully)

  Walrus:Iknowthatsong,Icansingittoo!(SingingwithSeal)

  Narrator:ButWalruscouldn’tsingatall.Hesoundedterrible.Infact,hesoundedlikearustyoldbucket.

  Seal:(Burstintofloodsoftears)Walrushasruinedmysong.

  Whale:(Leapedhighoutofthewaterandfellbackwithanenormoussplash)

  Walrus:Everybody,lookatme,Icandivetoo!(Thenheleapedintothewater)

  Narrator:Butjustatthatmoment,Whalewasgettingreadytospoutabigjetofwater.WhalespoutedWalrushighintotheair!

  Whale:(Furious)Youareameddling,incompetentbuffoon!Youhaveruinedmyact.Nowgetoutofmysight!

  Narrator:Theshowwasover.

  Walrus:(S

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  不错的剧本,微有瑕疵,大写改过,仅供参考:WalrusJoinsIn海象参加表演Narrator:EveryoneattheNorthPolewasveryexcited.Therewasgoingtobeashowandanyonecouldbeinit.ArcticFox:Iwilldoska...

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