请问这篇短剧有何语法上的漏洞!WalrusJoinsIn海象参加表演Narrator:EveryoneattheNorthPolewasveryexcited.Therewasgoingtobeashowandanyonecouldbeinit.ArcticFox:Iwilldoskating,I’mgoodatthat!PolarBear:
请问这篇短剧有何语法上的漏洞!
WalrusJoinsIn海象参加表演
Narrator:EveryoneattheNorthPolewasveryexcited.Therewasgoingtobeashowandanyonecouldbeinit.
ArcticFox:Iwilldoskating,I’mgoodatthat!
PolarBear:I’lldotumbling,noonetumblesquitelikeme!
Seal:I’lldosinging,everyonesaysIhaveaveryfinevoice!
Whale:ThenI’lldodiving.Iwonaprizefordivingatschool,youknow.
ArcticFox,PolarBear,Seal,Whale:(AskedtoWalrus)Whatwillyoudo?
Walrus:(Fellveryunhappy,triedtocry)Ican’tdoanything.
ArcticFox:Nevermind,youcanwatchus.
Walrus:(Hidbehindasnowdrift,speaksadlyandquietly)WhyIcandonothing?
Narrator:Atlast,thebigshowarrived.
ArcticFox:(Skateforwardsandbackwardsandsideways)
Walrus:(LeapontotheiceandjoininwithFox)Icanskate,lookatme!
Narrator:ButWalruscouldn’tskateatall.Hecouldonlytripupandfallover.HebumpedintoFox,andFoxwentflatonherface.
ArcticFox:(Upset)Walrushasruinedmyact.
PolarBear:(Jumpandspinandsomersaultandstandonhishand)
Walrus:(Leapontotheice)Icantumbletoo,lookatme!
Narrator:ButWalruscouldn’ttumbleatall.Hecouldonlytripupandfallover.HetrippedupPolarBear.
PolarBear:(Angry)Walrushasruinedmyact.
Seal:O,howmyheartrejoiceswhenIseetheNorthernLights.Myearisfilledwithvoicessweetlysinginginthenight!(Singingbeautifully)
Walrus:Iknowthatsong,Icansingittoo!(SingingwithSeal)
Narrator:ButWalruscouldn’tsingatall.Hesoundedterrible.Infact,hesoundedlikearustyoldbucket.
Seal:(Burstintofloodsoftears)Walrushasruinedmysong.
Whale:(Leapedhighoutofthewaterandfellbackwithanenormoussplash)
Walrus:Everybody,lookatme,Icandivetoo!(Thenheleapedintothewater)
Narrator:Butjustatthatmoment,Whalewasgettingreadytospoutabigjetofwater.WhalespoutedWalrushighintotheair!
Whale:(Furious)Youareameddling,incompetentbuffoon!Youhaveruinedmyact.Nowgetoutofmysight!
Narrator:Theshowwasover.
Walrus:(S