【这是我写的英语作文,去年专接本的,老师发了作文模板我照着写了一下,感觉挺费劲的,请大家帮我改改PrivateCarsNowadaysmanypeoplepreperprivatecarsbecauseithasasignificantroleinourdaliylife.Generally,it】
这是我写的英语作文,去年专接本的,老师发了作文模板我照着写了一下,感觉挺费劲的,请大家帮我改改
PrivateCars
Nowadaysmanypeoplepreperprivatecarsbecauseithasasignificantroleinourdaliylife.Generally,itsadvantagescanbeseenasfollows.First,theprivatecarscanmakeitmoreconvenientforpeopletoworkandandtravelandmakethemenjoytheirlifebetter.Besides,theprivatecarshaveimprovedthequalityoflifeandworkefficiency.
Buteverycoinhastwosides.Thenegativeaspectsarealsoapparent.Oneoftheimportantdisadvantagesisthatcausingthetrafficjams,Tomakematterworse,theincreaseofprivatecarshavecausedtheenvironmentalpollution.
Throughtheaboveanalysis,Ibelievethatpositiveaspectsoverweighthenegativeones.Iwouldliketothepeoplehaveprivatecars.