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  【这是我写的英语作文,去年专接本的,老师发了作文模板我照着写了一下,感觉挺费劲的,请大家帮我改改PrivateCarsNowadaysmanypeoplepreperprivatecarsbecauseithasasignificantroleinourdaliylife.Generally,it】

  这是我写的英语作文,去年专接本的,老师发了作文模板我照着写了一下,感觉挺费劲的,请大家帮我改改

  PrivateCars

  Nowadaysmanypeoplepreperprivatecarsbecauseithasasignificantroleinourdaliylife.Generally,itsadvantagescanbeseenasfollows.First,theprivatecarscanmakeitmoreconvenientforpeopletoworkandandtravelandmakethemenjoytheirlifebetter.Besides,theprivatecarshaveimprovedthequalityoflifeandworkefficiency.

  Buteverycoinhastwosides.Thenegativeaspectsarealsoapparent.Oneoftheimportantdisadvantagesisthatcausingthetrafficjams,Tomakematterworse,theincreaseofprivatecarshavecausedtheenvironmentalpollution.

  Throughtheaboveanalysis,Ibelievethatpositiveaspectsoverweighthenegativeones.Iwouldliketothepeoplehaveprivatecars.

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2020-04-22 15:55
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  has-----------plays较好

  Generally-------Generallyspeaking较好

  改:

  efficiency------efficiently,work这是动词,后面要用副词修饰,当然,为了对称,也可以改为:

  theefficiencyofwork

  tomakematterworse-----tomakethematterworse

  have------has,theincreaseof:增加……的危险,表示……的危险的时候,谓语动词用单数形式

  Iwouldliketothepeoplehaveprivatecars.-----------Iwouldlikethepeopletohaveprivatecars.

  wouldlike=want,适合wantsbtodosth,即是wouldlikesbtodosth

2020-04-22 15:57:18
陈其安

  tomakematterworse我打错了,是matters,这句话是模板里的一句话。最后一段我还需要再补充些别的吗?总感觉很不充实

2020-04-22 16:00:01
范兴平

  tomakemattersworse可以个人觉得最后一段,你可以再写一点自己的观点与看法,像你支持哪种观点的理由:就拿本题来说,你可以在发挥一下,因为你已经说出了你支持私家车的优点多,持支持的态度,那么你就需再深入点谈谈你为什么持该种观点的理由。

2020-04-22 16:03:34
陈其安

  能帮我后续写一下吗?感激不尽

2020-04-22 16:08:08
范兴平

  Itdoesusalotofgood,wecan'tignorethefatethatprivatecarshavemakeourdailyliftmoreinterestingandexciting.What'smore,onlywehaveconvinienttraffictool,dowesavemuchtimetodosomethingwewanttodo.However,therearemyownopiniononmypart.Howaboutyou?Mydearfriends,doyouagreeonme?

2020-04-22 16:10:26

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