Therearestillmanyproblemsofenvironmentalprotectioninrecentyears.Oneofthemostseriousproblemsistheseriouspollutionofair,waterandsoil。Thepollutedairdoesgreatharmtopeople’shealth.Thepollutedwatercausesdiseasesanddeath.Whatismore,vegetationhadbeengreatlyreducedwiththerapidgrowthofmoderncities.Inconclusion,theenvironmentalmatterisanimportantissuethatdirectlyaffectseveryhumanintheworld!Pollutionhasbeenaseriousproblemforacertaintimearoundtheworld.Therearemanycausesforit.Transportationisthemainfactorofpollution.Whenthewastegasfromcarsisreleased,theairispolluted.Peoplebreathinginthepollutedaircandeveloprespiratorydisease.Anotherfactoristhatpeoplethrowtheirgarbageeverywhere.Allkindsofgarbagenotonlyspoilthesplendidenvironment,butalsocauseenvironmentalpollution.What'smore,industrialpollutionalsodeservesourattention.Wastewaterfromfactoriesispouredintoriversandthiscauseswaterpollution.Asaconsequence,thegreenhouseeffectbecomesaproblemwhichneedsourimmediatecautionandhowtosolveisurgentallovertheworld.Atpresent,somemeasureshavebeentakentoprevernt.Forexample,peopleclassifythegarbageandsomeisrecycledafterbeingcollected.Peoplearealsoencouragedtousepaperproductsinsteadofplasticproductsbecauseweknowthatourlivingconditionwillbeworseifwekeepignoringthisproblem.AndIbelievewecanpreventpollutionifeveryonemakestheefforts

　　我要六十字左右。，，，

　　哦

　　你没有短点的么？

　　你可以把中间部分删击一些

　　怎么删。我是学渣。你帮我改吧。多谢了。学霸

　　Therearestillmanyproblemsofenvironmentalprotectioninrecentyears.Oneofthemostseriousproblemsistheseriouspollutionofair,waterandsoil。Thepollutedairdoesgreatharmtopeople’shealth.Thepollutedwatercausesdiseasesanddeath.Whatismore,vegetationhadbeengreatlyreducedwiththerapidgrowthofmoderncities.Inconclusion,theenvironmentalmatterisanimportantissuethatdirectlyaffectseveryhumanintheworld!Pollutionhasbeenaseriousproblemforacertaintimearoundtheworld.Therearemanycausesforit.

　　我会采纳你的。

　　谢谢

　　好的。谢了。

　　你的回答完美的解决了我的问题，谢谢！