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  【Hello,everyone.ThebusisleavinginafewminuteSoI'djustlikegooversomeofoursaferulesbHello,everyone.ThebusisleavinginafewminuteSoI'djustlikegooversomeofoursaferulesbeforewesetoff.Firstly,youmustn'tgetoutofthe】

  Hello,everyone.ThebusisleavinginafewminuteSoI'djustlikegooversomeofoursaferulesb

  Hello,everyone.ThebusisleavinginafewminuteSoI'djustlikegooversomeofoursaferulesbeforewesetoff.Firstly,youmustn'tgetoutofthebuswithmypermission

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  Hello,everyone.ThebusisleavinginafewminuteSoI'djustlikegooversomeofoursaferulesbeforewesetoff.Firstly,youmustn'tgetoutofthebuswithmypermissionRememberthatyou'resafeinsidethebus.Ifyougetoutofonyourtown,youcouldbeattacked.Secondly,youallmuststaycloselytome.

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2020-04-22 22:12
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  有两处错误,具体分析如下:

  1.正确Hello,everyone.——呼语

  2.正确Thebusisleavinginafewminute.

  ——inafewminute表示将来的“几分钟后”,趋向动词的进行时态isleaving表示不久的将来,

  3.部分有错误SoI'djustlikegooversomeofoursaferulesbeforewesetoff.

  1)正确的讲法应该是'dliketodo,因此此处要改为I'djustliketogooversomeofoursaferules;

  2)后面的时间状语从句中用一般现在时态表示将来没有错误.

  4.有错误Firstly,youmustn'tgetoutofthebuswithmypermission

  ——youmustn'tgetoutofthebus意思是“你们绝对不能下车”,而withmypermission却表示“在我的许可下”,前后矛盾,应该改为withoutmypermission(没有我的许可).

  5.补充部分也有两处错误:

  1)Ifyougetoutofonyourtown应该改为Ifyougetoutofthebusonyourtown或者Ifyougetoutonyourtown.理由是of是介词,后面必须有宾语,因此必须补充宾语thebus或者干脆删除of.

  2)youallmuststaycloselytome.中的stay是表示状态的系动词,其后应该用形容词close作表语,需要改为youallmuststayclosetome(把副词closely改为形容词close)

2020-04-22 22:15:34

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