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  请英语高手帮忙看看作文帮我找找语法错误IwillreceiveaBachelor’sDegreeofmedicineafterIgraduatefrommycollegethissummer.Ontheonehand,althoughIhavestudiedmymajorfor5years.ButIknow,myknowledgeislimited,an

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  IwillreceiveaBachelor’sDegreeofmedicineafterIgraduatefrommycollegethissummer.Ontheonehand,althoughIhavestudiedmymajorfor5years.ButIknow,myknowledgeislimited,andIhavealongwaytogoonmymajor.Ontheotherhand,myfriendwhograduatedfromyouruniversityrecommendedittome.SOIthinkifIcouldhaveachancetostudyatyourschoolandfinallyobtainaMaster’sDegreeofMedicine,Iwouldbeverylucky!

  CouldyoupleasetellmesomethingaboutyouruniversitysuchasthefeeIshouldpayandhowabouttheaccommodationandtheirqualifications.WouldyoupleasesendmeanapplicationformandothermaterialsnecessaryformyapplicationssothatIcouldbegintheapplicationprocedure.

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  althoughIhavestudiedmymajorfor5years.ButIknow,myknowledgeislimited,andIhavealongwaytogoonmymajor.

  标准中国式英语.although和but不能一起用的!去掉其中一个

  Ontheonehand...Ontheotherhand不能乱用的

  一般表示两个相反的意思,突出内容的对比性,相当于but.

  recommend也不是这样用的.

  要么recommendthat...跟从句,

  要么recommendsth.

  要么recommendsb.todo..

  recommendsthtosb是指把某物托付给某人,你的朋友把这所大学托付给你了?

  应改成:

  Ihavestudiedmymajorfor5years.ButIknowmyknowledgeislimited,andIhavealongwaytogoonmymajor.Besides,myfriendwhograduatedfromyouruniversityrecommendedmetoenteryouruniversityforafurtherstudy.

  SOIthinkifIcouldhaveachancetostudyatyourschoolandfinallyobtainaMaster’sDegreeofMedicine,Iwouldbeverylucky!

  首先,不要用school,那是给人家降档次.

  其次,SoIthink很累赘."Ithink..."这种句型只有在别人让你表达看法,或者当你成为了某一方面的权威,发表权威性看法的时候才能用.不知道为什么中国学生都喜欢用这两个词.

  最后,句型应该倒装,把lucky放到前面去.

  应改成:ItwouldbeveryluckyifIcouldhaveachancetostudyatyouruniversityandobtainaMaster'sDegreeofMedicine.

  CouldyoupleasetellmesomethingaboutyouruniversitysuchasthefeeIshouldpayandhowabouttheaccommodationandtheirqualifications.

  学费有专有的一个词:tuition,不要用fee.

  还有我不知道你的qualifications是指什么?指入住宿舍的资格条件吗?如果不是的话就把qualifications放到第一个来讲,毕竟这是最重要的.

  Wouldyoupleasegivemesomeinformationaboutthequalificationforyouruniversity,thetuitionaswellastheaccommodationcondition.

2020-04-24 11:39:59

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