英语作文修改.高中五句式myfirstdayatjuniorhighschoolmyfirstdayatjuniorhighschoolistillrememberthedayicametothejuniorschool.itwasexcitingthatisawnewclassmatesteachersandnewcompus.wheniarrivedatclassroom

　　英语作文修改.高中五句式myfirstdayatjuniorhighschool

　　myfirstdayatjuniorhighschool

　　istillrememberthedayicametothejuniorschool.itwasexcitingthatisawnewclassmatesteachersandnewcompus.wheniarrivedatclassroom,ifoundlotsofstudentssitontheirseat.isaidhellowtomynewclassmatesthenwewalkedaroundintheschool.iwasproudthaticouldstudiedatthisbeautifulschool.

　　有什么高级词汇或句式可是替换修改的帮忙改下作文