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　　【大家帮我看看这个自我介绍怎么修改,感激不尽~考研英语复试自我介绍Goodmorning.Iamgladtobehereforthisinterview.Firstletmeintroducemyself.MynameisMafei,Iamthirty-threeyearsold.IcomefromXingtaicityofHe】

　　大家帮我看看这个自我介绍怎么修改,感激不尽~

　　考研英语复试自我介绍

　　Goodmorning.Iamgladtobehereforthisinterview.Firstletmeintroducemyself.MynameisMafei,Iamthirty-threeyearsold.IcomefromXingtaicityofHebeiProvince.IgraduatedfromHanDanMedicalCollegeinJuly,2001.IwentonafieldtriptoXingtaiPeople’sHospital.InthepastoneyearIhavebeenpreparingforthepostgraduateexaminationwhileI’vebeenworkinginahospitalasdoctor.AndthetenyearsofworkexperienceletmeknowthatIneedtopromotemyselfbytheStageofpostgraduatestudy.

　　LikemostoftheHebeipeople,Iamastraightforwardperson.Inmysparetime,Ilikereadingbooksandlisitingmusic.Iamadiligentstudentduringmycollegestudying,andInmycollege,Iactivelyresponsetothecallofthecollege,takepartinallkindsofusefulactivities.

　　Ialwaysbelievethatonewilleasilylagbehindunlesshekeepsonlearning.Ofcourse,ifIamgivenachanceforadvancedstudiesinthisfamousUniversity,Iwillstaretoefforttomasteragoodcommandofadvancemycapability.

　　MountTaihangisthemostfamoustouristattractionsinHebeiProvince,eachyearmanypeopleacrossthecountrycomeheretoplay,XingtailocatedinthesouthernofHebeiProvince,Thescientist.Guoshoujing’shometown

　　Tenyearsofworkexperienceletmeknowthat,IneedStageofpostgraduatestudytopromotemyself.BecausethekownledgeIhaveownedcan’tmeetmyneeds.

　　In2001.IwentonafieldtriptoXingtaiPeople’sHospital,Thenin2009,IgotanopportunitytotakeadvancedstudyintheDepartmentofNeurologyofXingtaiPeople’sHospitalagain.Now,IamworkingintheSecondaryHospitalofRenxian.Withtheaccumulationofexperience,Icanindependentlydealwiththecommondisease,thetreatmentofcommonemergencyandseriousdisease.

　　Myfatherandmymatherarepeasant,andtheyarealldiligent.IlovemyfamilyIlovemyfatherandmother.

　　Astimefling,IfindIneedenrichingmyself.Inordertoachievemygoal,Itrymybest.So,Iamhere.Itwillbemygreathonortotakepartinthere-interview.Icherishtheopportunityverymuch.IfIbecomeastudentofyourcollege,IwillworkharderandtrymybesttomakecontributionstothedevelopmentofMedicalwork.Thankyou!

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　　Goodmorning(everyone)!Iam(honored)tobehereforthisinterview.Firstletmeintroducemyself.MynameisMafei.Iamthirty-threeyearsold.Icomefrom(Xingtai,Hebei).IgraduatedfromHanDanMedicalCollegeinJuly,2001.[IwentonafieldtriptoXingtaiPeople’sHospital.][这句话的意义是什么?因为放在这里前不承后不接]Inthepastyear,IhavebeenpreparingforthepostgraduateexaminationwhileI’vebeenworkinginahospitalasadoctor.Tenyearsofworkexperience(toldme)whatIneedtopromotemyselfbythestageofpostgraduatestudy.

　　Likemostofthe(peoplefromHebei),Iamastraightforwardperson.Inmysparetime,Ilikereadingbooksandlisitingmusic.I(was)adiligentstudentduringmycollege(years).(Forexample),Iactivelyrespondedtothecallofthecollege(byparticipating)inallkindsofusefulactivities.

　　Ialwaysbelievethatonewilleasilylagbehindunlesshekeepslearning.Ofcourse,ifIamgivenachanceforadvancedstudiesinthisfamousUniversity,[Iwillstaretoefforttomasteragoodcommandofadvancemycapability].[完全不通顺,如果你的意思是“我会努力发挥我的能力”,那就应该是Iwilltrythebesttodevelopandusemyabilities].

　　MountTaihangisthemostfamous(viewspotfortourists)inHebeiProvince.Eachyear(alotof)peopleacrossthecountrycomehere(forvacation).XingtaiislocatedinsouthernHebeiProvince,whereisthehometownofthescientistGuoshoujing.

　　Tenyearsofworkexperienceletmeknowthat,Ineedthepostgraduatestudytopromotemyself,becausethekownledgeIhave(now)can’tmeetmyneeds.[和第一段重复了]

　　In2001.IwentonafieldtriptoXingtaiPeople’sHospital,In2009,IgotanopportunitytotakeadvancedstudyintheDepartmentofNeurologyofXingtaiPeople’sHospitalagain.Now,IamworkingintheSecondaryHospitalofRenxian.Withtheaccumulationofexperience,Icanindependentlydealwithcommondiseases,treatmentofcommonemergenciesandseriousdiseases.

　　My(parents)are(farmerswhoarealldiligentpeople).Ilovemyfamily.

　　Astime(flies),I(realizedthatIneedtoenrich)myself.Inordertoachievemygoal,I(will)trymybest.ThereforeIamhere.Itwillbemygreathonorto(haveachanceforthesecondinterview).I(appreciate)theopportunityverymuch.IfI(getacceptedintothiscollege),Iwillworkharderandtry(better)tomakecontributionstothedevelopmentofMedicalwork.Thankyou!

　　PS:如果这是考研面试时候你要说的话.我觉得你还是再花点心思吧.

2020-04-28 22:17:23

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