Hello,everyone.It’snicetospeakaboutwhatwecandoforourschool,andIthinkeachofuscandosomething.Thefirstthingwecandoistobehaveourselveswellandbepoliteallthetime.Weshouldrespecttheteachersandhelpourclassmates.Thenweshouldtryourbesttomakeourcampuscleanandbeautiful.Everyoneofusmaytakecareofthetreesandgrassinthecampus,andwecanalsoformagoodhabitofputtingtherubbishinthedustbin.Ifeveryonedoesonethingforourschool,Ibelievewewillmakeourschoolabetterplacetostudyandlivein.

　　Asastudent,themostimportantistostudyhard，haveagoodknowledgeofeverysubjectandimproveourselvesineveryaspect.What’smore,wecantakeexerciseandbuildupourstrengthinordertomakegreatcontributionstoourcountryinthefuture.Ourschoolwillbeproudofus.

　　这篇文章主要是根据要点翻译，但是不能逐字逐句翻译，文章里用了些高级的词汇、短语，如：behaveourselves，makeourcampusclean，formagoodhabitof，haveagoodknowledgeof，ineveryaspect.buildupourstrength，makegreatcontributionsto，beproudof，这些都是平常学的，但是学生用的时候就想不起来。在句型翻译中，范文给了很好的例子：wewillmakeourschoolabetterplacetostudyandlivein.themostimportantistostudyhard，对不定式的熟练使用恰到好处。另外值得一提的是，在文章衔接连贯时我们也要注意，像这篇文章，用的是What’smore,读起来很自然。