Iwenthikingtoamountainwithmyfriendslastsummer.

　　Itwasagoodtripatthebeginningbutsomethingunexpectedhappenedonthehalfway.Oneofmyfriendssuddenlyfeltaterriblepaininhisstomachandhecouldn‘tmoveanyfurther.Nobodyknewwhattodo.

　　Onegirltriedtocallhermumwithhermobilephonebuttherewasnosignalinthemountainarea.Luckilywebroughtatentwithus.Weputitupandlethimrestinit.Hetooksomemedicine.Thenhedranksomewater,andatesomefood.Afterawhile,hefeltmuchbetterandwewalkedon.Weallenjoyedourselvesonthetopofthemountain.

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　　MyGoodFriend

　　ZhangYingismygoodfriend.She’sinClass1,Grade4ofTianjiaoPrimarySchool.She’samodelstudent.She’scleverandshe’shelpful,too.Sheoftenhelpsteachersandyoungstudentsatschool.SheisgoodatChinese,maths,English,artsandcrafts,musicandsoon.Shehasalotofhobbies.Shelikespaintinganddrawing.Andshelikeslisteningtomusic,havingpicnicswithherparents.Ohyeah,shelikesfishing,too.Butshedoesn’tlikeplayingbasketball,football,tabletennisorvolleyball.ZhangYingisthebestfriendofmine.Ilikeplayingwithher.Wealwaysworktogetherandhelpeachother

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