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　　帮我看一下这篇短文有没有错.急Helli,everyone!Iamondutytoday.TodayisMonday.TodayisDecember21th2009.Weareallhere.Ihaveagoodfriend,hernameisWangMin.WecalledherLuDan,becauseshehasaroundface.Herhairi

　　帮我看一下这篇短文有没有错.急

　　Helli,everyone!Iamondutytoday.TodayisMonday.TodayisDecember21th2009.Weareallhere.Ihaveagoodfriend,hernameisWangMin.WecalledherLuDan,becauseshehasaroundface.Herhairisshortblack,shehasabignose,buthereyesaresmall.HerlanguageisgoodandmyEnglishisgood,soshehelpsmestudylanguage,andIhelpherstudyEnglish.Wehelpeachother.HerbirthdayisatChristmas,Iwillwishherahappybirthday.

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2020-04-28 17:29

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　　可以这样改：Helli,everyone!Iamondutytoday.TodayisMonday,December21th2009.Weareallhere.Ihaveagoodfriend,hernameisWangMin.WecallherLuDan,becauseshehasaroundface.Herhairisshortandblack,shehasabignose,buthereyesaresmall.HerChineseisgoodandmyEnglishisgood,soshehelpsmewithmyChineseandIhelpherstudyEnglish.Wehelpeachother.HerbirthdayisonChristmas,Iwishherahappybirthday.我有一个好朋友,她的名字是王敏.我们叫她卤蛋,是因为她有一张圆圆的脸.她的头发又短又黑.她的鼻子很大,但是她的眼睛却很小.她的语文好,而我是英语,所以她帮我学习语文,而我帮助她学习英语,我们互相帮助.她的生日就在圣诞节,我祝她生日快乐.Christmas是具体某一天,前面的介词应该用on不是感觉,你是学生吧?就中学生而言,记住具体某一天前的介词用on,除非是固定的词组

2020-04-28 17:32:36

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