Onepossibleversion:Asaproverbgoes“Preparednessensuressuccessandunpreparednessspellsfailure”.Itcan’tbedeniedthatgoodpreparationisoneoftheessentialsofsuccess.ThefirsttwoyearsofmyjuniormiddleschoollifewentsosmoothlyandIgotsogoodgradesineveryexamthatItookitforgrantedthatIwassuretobeadmittedbyakeyhighschool.Thus，inmyjuniorthreeIbegantotallylooseningmyselfupandnolongerfocusedonstudy.Itisnoaccidentthatmyacademicperformancedeclinedsharply.NotuntilthelastmonthofmyjuniorthreedidIrealizeitandconcentratedonlearningagain.Howeveritwastoolatetomakefullpreparationthen—Ifailedintheseniorhighschoolentranceexamination.FrommyexperienceIseethatatnotimeshouldweignoretheimportanceofmakinggoodpreparationandthatsuccessbelongstothosewhocansufferlongyearsofpatienttoilandconstantefforts.

　　分析：

　　考查开放性作文。开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。

　　【亮点说明】范文用了一些常见短语：takeitforgranted视为当然，beadmittedby录取，looseningmyselfup放松自己，focuson专注于，belongto属于，还有范文中的句式也很出彩：Asaproverbgoes“Preparednessensuressuccessandunpreparednessspellsfailure”.这句话用了非限制性定语从句，NotuntilthelastmonthofmyjuniorthreedidIrealizeitandconcentratedonlearningagain.这句话用了倒装句，andthatsuccessbelongstothosewhocansufferlongyearsofpatienttoilandconstantefforts.这句话用了定语从句，Howeveritwastoolatetomakefullpreparationthen—Ifailedintheseniorhighschoolentranceexamination.这句话用到了however表转折语气。

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　　考查开放性作文写作