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  【我英语作文写的怎么样DearMrGoo:September4thHowareyou?Weheavn’tseenforoneweek.IambusythatIamhavingclassesintheclassroom.Forthis,Wehaveafewtimetotalk.I】

  我英语作文写的怎么样

  DearMrGoo:September4th

  Howareyou?Weheavn’tseenforoneweek.IambusythatIamhavingclassesintheclassroom.Forthis,Wehaveafewtimetotalk.IgotothemiddleschoolofSihuieveryday.Ittakesmesometimesgoingtoschool.AndIhavemetmanyclassmateslately.InsteadofChinese,mathandEnglish,itincreasesfoursujuctsinthemiddleschool.Don’tworryaboutme.Ihavefoundthemiddleschoollivesisveryinteresting.Imadeabigdecistion.Inreturnforyours,Ishallbestudyingharderthanbefore.Themiddleschoolissobeautiful.Inthemiddleschool,manytallbuildingwillbecallingyoureyes.Thelakeisquietandbright.Bythelake,somanyplantsthere.Youwillbesohappythere.Yourstudent:Ben

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2020-04-28 11:37
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  恩恩六年级啊,那很不错诶.不过里面有些小错误.给你修改一下

  DearMrGoo:September4th

  Howareyou?Weheavn’tseeneachotherforoneweek.IambusywithalltheclassihaveForthis,Wehavelittletimetotalk.IgotothemiddleschoolofSihuieveryday.Ittakesmesometimegoingtoschool.AndIhavemetmanyclassmateslately.ExceptChinese,mathandEnglish,therearefourmoresujuctsinmiddleschool.Don’tworryaboutme.Ihavefoundthemiddleschoollifetobeveryinteresting.Imadeabigdecistion.Toreturnyourteaching,Ishallbestudyingharderthanbefore.Themiddleschoolissobeautiful.Therearemanytallbuildingcallingyoureyes.Thelakeisquietandbright.Bythelake,somanyplantsarethere.Youwillbesohappythere.

  Yourstudent:Ben

  恩有一些小错误,语法和用词方面的.不过六年级真的很厉害了~我特别喜欢那句:buildingcallingyoureyes.

  哈哈我觉得非常好~总之希望可以帮到你!努力学习,天天向上咯~

2020-04-28 11:39:48

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