【帮我修改下我文章的语法Duringthe1930s,whenHitlercametopower,thelifeinNaziGermanywaschangedgreatly.MostoftheGermanslivedbetterthoughtHitler,forsomegroupswhichwerenotacceptedbytheNazisuchasJewswerehaveahor】
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Duringthe1930s,whenHitlercametopower,thelifeinNaziGermanywaschangedgreatly.MostoftheGermanslivedbetterthoughtHitler,forsomegroupswhichwerenotacceptedbytheNazisuchasJewswerehaveahorrificlife.TheNaziaffecteddifferentgroupsofpeopleindifferentways,workerswereencouragedtoworkhardbyaward,andprovidecheapentertainment;womenweretreatedashomemakers;andNazistooktheirexcessivehatredofJewstoaterriblesituation.
ThelivesofordinaryGermanworkershavechangedbyNazirule.Inordertoimprovetheeconomyandgetcreditfromtheworkingclass,in1933theorganizationcalledStrengththroughjoy(KraftdurchFreundeorKdF)wasestablished.Itprovidedmanycheapentertainmentssuchassportclubs,theatretrips,swimmingcourses,etc.KdFalsoprovidedrewardstoencouragedworkersworkharder.Alotofpeopleenjoyedtheseactivesanditbecamemoreandmorepopular.ForNazis,itwasanachievementthatmostpeoplehavechangedtheirattitudeofdemocracy;workswerenotinterestedinpoliticsaslongastheyhaveajobtoraiseafamily.Anothercrazyideawasthepeople’scar.Hitlerbelievedthateveryoneshallownacar;heaskedthefactorytoproducedlowpricecarsthateveryonecanafford.PeoplewerepossessedbythePropagandaMinistry.Thepurposeofpeople’scarwastogetthedomesticpoliticalcreditastheyofferedcheapcars.However,noonereceivedacarbecausethefactorychangedtoproducedweaponsduringtheWorldWarII.LotsofGermanshavedegeneratedunderthetemptationofbenefit,andtheyalsohelpHitlercametopower.
Besidesworkers,womenweresufferingbytheNazirule.TheNazisdeclaredthatwomen’sjobwereprovidedahealthyfamily.HitlerbelievedthenextgenerationwashopeofNazi;theyweregoingtogrowupintheNazisociety.ThereweremanyNaziposterspromotedtheideaofmotherhoodandhousewife.Hitlerhighlightthatwomenmuststayathomeandproductasmuchashealthychildren,theNazialsoencouragewomentobirthedmorechildrenbyawardingthembaseonthenumberofchildrentheyhad.ThepurposewastohavemorehealthyandstrongNazisoldiers.Girlsweretaughthowtobeagoodmotherandhousewifeinschool.Inmyopinion,ononehand,Hitlerhavetakenallthewomen’srightbycontroll