Myfather

　　Myfatheralwaysstandsinthecenterofmylife,frompasttillnowandpossiblyinthefuture.

　　MyfamilywasratherpoorwhenIwasinmychildhood.Wedidn'thaveourownhouseandhadtoliveinashabby,smallroomrentedfrommyfather'sfactory.Theroomwassosmallthattherewaslittlespaceforpeopletowalk.Ididn'thavemyownbedandhadtosleepwithmyparents.Thisisterriblebothformyparentsandme.

　　Butfathermadethisalldifferent!Sincetheroomwasonthethirdfloor,namely,thetopfloorinthatoldstylebuilding,theroofwasquitehighabovethefloor.Sofathergotanidea.Heboughttwothickropesandaflatwoodthatlaterwasplanedsmooth,paintedanddrilledtwoholesonbothends.

　　Thenhehungtheendsofropesuptotheroof.Duringthedaytime,thesetworopeswouldbetiedupsothatpeopledowncouldwalkfreely!Whennightcame,fatherwouldloosetheropesandtiedthemtothetwoholesofthatflatwood.Thelengthoftheseropeswasjustlongenoughformetositorsleepontheboardwithoutother'shelp.

　　Sointhiswaymylovely,removablebedwasborn.

　　Whenwintercame,thisspecialbedobviouslywouldn'tbeabletomakemefeelwarmenough.Butfatheralwayshadhissolution!Hebuiltagarretusingsomeflatwoodandironsticksrightabovethebed.Withsomeusedirontubes,hemadeanironladderforustoclimbuptothegarret.Besides,hemadeawoodendeskformetodomyhomework,andsomesimplefurnitureformyclothes,booksandsomethingelsehehadinfactmadeasmallbedroomforme.

　　Atfirst,mymotherandIdarednotclimbforfearthatitmightcollapse.Butfatherclimbediteverydaytoproveitssafety.Thegarretlookedsimpleevenshabbyandtheladderseemedtodeclinesoon.ButlaterwhenIgotusedtoit,Ifounditassolidasthosemadebyprofessionalcarpenters.

　　Icarriedallmypersonalthingsontothatgarret.MyfatherandIpastedredpapersonthewallandpaintedtheuglyfurniturered.Sothegarretbecamethefirst"room"thatbelongedtome.WhenIwasabouttomovetomynewhouse,Ijustdidn'twanttoleave.Thatgarretwascreatedwithmyfather'sloveandsweatandintelligence,beautifiedwithmyhandandfilledwithsomanysweetmemoriesofmyfamily!Thathardbutsweetlifetimewouldliveinmymemoryforeverwithfatherstandsinthecenterofit.

　　简评

　　一个贫寒的家庭.一个充满爱心又能干的父亲.一张父亲制作的简易木床.一个记忆中永远温馨的卧房.描写父爱可以从很多方面入手,可以写很多很多.应该说,这篇文章的语言并没有多少特殊之处.之所以感人至深,是因为这篇文章的选材：集中笔墨写父亲制作的简易木床.这就是突出中心的好处.一滴水可以折射出太阳的光辉；一张木床也可以反映伟大的父爱.父母之爱如三春朝晖无处不在,生活中的任何一点小事都足以将他们对儿女的爱表达得淋漓尽致.其实,想多写,又怎么写得尽?