TodayIread"theuglyduckling"thispieceoffairytales.Afterreadingit,Ivery:theuglyducklingwasaeverywheretobeexcludedofduck,butithasawonderfuldream,itisthedreamtomakeitindomitablestruggle,becameabeautifulwhiteswan.Infact,inourreallife,howmanypeopleisnotthelittleuglyduck?Wearestudents,isthevastlearntheseaoftheuglyduckling,andtheknowledgeshortandshallow,butwewanttohaveadream,isdeterminedtogetintoafamousuniversity,andtowardsourdreamhardeffort.Wemusttakethemotherland'shope,parentsofexpectations,toflytothehappytomorrow!Comeon,what'stheproblem,whatsad,whatannoyed,throwthem,let'sopenourwingsfly!Teachercommenton:theauthorheartfullofambition,especiallyreading"theuglyduckling"thisarticleafterthefairytale,feelingmore.Don'tforhisowndefectsandtrouble,aslongasthehearttohavehope,andthelittleuglyduckwillbeideal.TheauthorUSESshorttexttothereadershope,likethewhiteswanwingstoflyas.

　　今天我读了《丑小鸭》这篇童话故事.读完后,我深有感触：丑小鸭是一只处处受排挤的鸭子,但它却怀有一份美好的梦想,正是这份梦想让它不屈的奋斗,成了一只美丽的白天鹅.实际上,在我们的现实生活中,有多少人不是丑小鸭呢?我们是学生,是茫茫学海里的丑小鸭,知识短浅,但我们要拥有梦想,立志考上一所名牌大学,并朝着我们的梦想努力的拼搏.我们一定能带着祖国的希望,父母的期盼,飞向美好的明天!来吧,什么难题,什么伤心,什么懊恼,抛开它们,让我们张开翅膀飞起来吧!名师点评：作者心中充满了雄心壮志,特别是在读了《丑小鸭》这篇童话故事后,感触更深.不要为自己的缺陷而烦恼,只要心中有希望,就一定和丑小鸭一样会实现理想.作者用简短的文字给了读者希望,要像白天鹅一样张开翅膀去飞翔.