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  【请大家帮我修改英文自我推荐信DearMs.Luo,Thankyouforreadingmyletter!IamCandy,andmyChinesenameisLiXiaofang,asophomorefromLiberalArtsCollege.IwishtorecommendmyselftobethestudentchiefinspectorofEnglishFestival】

  请大家帮我修改英文自我推荐信

  DearMs.Luo,

  Thankyouforreadingmyletter!IamCandy,andmyChinesenameisLiXiaofang,asophomorefromLiberalArtsCollege.IwishtorecommendmyselftobethestudentchiefinspectorofEnglishFestival2009.

  Yesterday,IaskedMiawhetheryouhaddecidedwhowouldbethestudentchiefinspectorbecauseIwantedtoaskSamueltosendmetheproposalandothermaterialsofEF2007inadvance.I’mafraidIcannotgetintouchwithhimafterdefense.However,Iwastoldthatteachershadn’tdecidedyetandIshouldwaitfortheresultuntiltheendonMaybecausetheyhadtomakethedecisionwithcaution.ItoccurredtomethatIshouldnotbethepersonwhojustwaitsfortheresult.Itiswiseformetosendyoualettertorecommendmyselftothisposition.IfIsparenoefforttoapplyforit,nomatterwhattheresultis,Iwillnotberegretful.

  IthinkmywillingnesstoacceptresponsibilityqualifiesmetoarrangesomeEnglishactivities.IhavebeenastaffinELfornearlytwoyearsandtheleaderofpublicitydepartmentformorethanoneyear.In2008,IworkedasavolunteerinCrossCountryandthisyear,IalsodealwiththepromotionworkforCrossCountry.Lastyear,IwouldliketoworkforEFasavolunteer;howeverIlostthechancebecauseIhadn’tsentmyapplicationformquicklyenough.Havinglearntfromsuchexperience,thistime,IwouldliketotrymybesttopursuewhatIwant.

  IamconfidentthattheknowledgeIhavegainedhaspreparedmeformakingcontributionstoEF.InordertohaveagoodcommandofEnglish,Ikeepimprovingmyself.Iplantospendthissummervocationtodevelopmycapability,especiallymyEnglish.IfIwasgivenachancetobethestudentchiefinspectorofEF,Iwillbemorewillingtobea"self-starter",sinceIknowmyresponsibilityofthisposition.

  Isincerelyhopetoputupforthisseat.IfImayprovideyouwithanyfurtherinformationinyourconsiderationofme,pleasefeelfreetocontactmeoryoucanaskPaulaboutme.SheismyEnglishteacherandIbelievehecanrememberme.Lookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Thanksagainforyourtime!

  (请大家在错误的地方用数字标出或在后面的括号写上修改意见,如:1.Thanksagainforyoutime(yourtime).

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2020-05-06 14:50
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  DearMs.Luo,

  Thankyouforreadingmyletter!IamCandy,andmyChinesenameisLiXiaofang,asophomorefromLiberalArtsCollege.IwishtorecommendmyselftobethestudentchiefinspectorofEnglishFestival2009.

  (Thedaybefore),(when)IaskedMiawhetheryouhaddecidedwhowouldbethestudentchiefinspector(as)IwantedtoaskSamueltosendmetheproposalandothermaterialsofEF2007inadvance.I’mafraidIcannotgetintouchwithhimafterdefense.However,Iwastoldthatteachershadn’tdecidedyetandIshouldwaitfortheresultuntiltheendofMaybecausetheyhadtomakethedecisionwithcaution.(Then)itoccurredtomethatIshouldnotbethepersonwhojustwaitsfortheresult.Itiswiseformetosendyoualettertorecommendmyselftothisposition.IfIsparenoefforttoapplyforit,nomatterwhattheresultis,Iwillnotberegretful.

  Ithinkmywillingnesstoacceptresponsibility(makes)me(suitable)toarrangesomeEnglishactivities.IhavebeenastaffinELfornearlytwoyearsandtheleaderofpublicitydepartmentformorethanoneyear.In2008,IworkedasavolunteerinCrossCountryandthisyear,IalsodealwiththepromotionworkforCrossCountry.Lastyear,IwouldliketoworkforEFasavolunteer;howeverIlostthechancebecauseIhadnotsentmyapplicationformquicklyenough.Havinglearntfromsuchexperience,thistime,IwouldliketotrymybesttopursuewhatIwant.

  IamconfidentthattheknowledgeIhavegainedhaspreparedmeformakingcontributionstoEF.InordertohaveagoodcommandofEnglish,Ikeepimprovingmyself.Iplantospendthissummervocationtodevelopmycapability,especiallymyEnglish.IfIwasgivenachancetobethestudentchiefinspectorofEF,Iwillbemorewillingtobea"self-starter",sinceIknowmyresponsibilityofthisposition.

  Isincerelyhopetoputupforthisseat.IfImayprovideyouwithanyfurtherinformationinyourconsiderationofme,pleasefeelfreetocontactmeoryoucanaskPaulaboutme.SheismyEnglishteacherandIbelievehecanrememberme.Lookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Thanksagainforyourtime!

  (Regards,

  Candy)

  括号的地方是改过的,总的来说很好,把你自己的成就说了出来,希望你马到成功,帮学校做一个很好的英文节2009!

2020-05-06 14:55:16

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