【请大家帮我修改英文自我推荐信DearMs.Luo,Thankyouforreadingmyletter!IamCandy,andmyChinesenameisLiXiaofang,asophomorefromLiberalArtsCollege.IwishtorecommendmyselftobethestudentchiefinspectorofEnglishFestival】
请大家帮我修改英文自我推荐信
DearMs.Luo,
Thankyouforreadingmyletter!IamCandy,andmyChinesenameisLiXiaofang,asophomorefromLiberalArtsCollege.IwishtorecommendmyselftobethestudentchiefinspectorofEnglishFestival2009.
Yesterday,IaskedMiawhetheryouhaddecidedwhowouldbethestudentchiefinspectorbecauseIwantedtoaskSamueltosendmetheproposalandothermaterialsofEF2007inadvance.I’mafraidIcannotgetintouchwithhimafterdefense.However,Iwastoldthatteachershadn’tdecidedyetandIshouldwaitfortheresultuntiltheendonMaybecausetheyhadtomakethedecisionwithcaution.ItoccurredtomethatIshouldnotbethepersonwhojustwaitsfortheresult.Itiswiseformetosendyoualettertorecommendmyselftothisposition.IfIsparenoefforttoapplyforit,nomatterwhattheresultis,Iwillnotberegretful.
IthinkmywillingnesstoacceptresponsibilityqualifiesmetoarrangesomeEnglishactivities.IhavebeenastaffinELfornearlytwoyearsandtheleaderofpublicitydepartmentformorethanoneyear.In2008,IworkedasavolunteerinCrossCountryandthisyear,IalsodealwiththepromotionworkforCrossCountry.Lastyear,IwouldliketoworkforEFasavolunteer;howeverIlostthechancebecauseIhadn’tsentmyapplicationformquicklyenough.Havinglearntfromsuchexperience,thistime,IwouldliketotrymybesttopursuewhatIwant.
IamconfidentthattheknowledgeIhavegainedhaspreparedmeformakingcontributionstoEF.InordertohaveagoodcommandofEnglish,Ikeepimprovingmyself.Iplantospendthissummervocationtodevelopmycapability,especiallymyEnglish.IfIwasgivenachancetobethestudentchiefinspectorofEF,Iwillbemorewillingtobea"self-starter",sinceIknowmyresponsibilityofthisposition.
Isincerelyhopetoputupforthisseat.IfImayprovideyouwithanyfurtherinformationinyourconsiderationofme,pleasefeelfreetocontactmeoryoucanaskPaulaboutme.SheismyEnglishteacherandIbelievehecanrememberme.Lookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Thanksagainforyourtime!
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