谁帮我修改一下这篇关于人们庆祝春节的文章?英语口语!用于口语~帮修改一下错误,和设计一下上下文连接词.Today,IwilltalkabouthowtocelebratetheSpringFestival.SpringFestivalisthemostimportantfestival

　　谁帮我修改一下这篇关于人们庆祝春节的文章?英语口语!

　　用于口语~

　　帮修改一下错误,和设计一下上下文连接词.

　　Today,IwilltalkabouthowtocelebratetheSpringFestival.

　　SpringFestivalisthemostimportantfestivalinChina.PeoplewillbebusytopreparealotfortheSpringFestivalbeforeitcomes.Forexample,peoplewillbuysomenewclothes;buymanycandies,cookiesandfruits,whicharepreparedfortheSpringFestival.What’smore,peoplewillalsocleanuptheirhouseandpastecouplets.

　　WhenSpringFestivalcomes,thechildrenwillplayfireworksatnight.Andtheywillalsogettheredpacketsfromadults,whichareincludingthebestwishestochildrenabouttheSpringFestival.Besides,peoplewillvisitrelativesandfriends,andhaveadinnertogether.

　　Inmanypublicplaces,peoplewillorganizecelebrationactivitiestocelebratetheSpringFestival.

　　EveryonewantstohaveagoodbeginningintheSpringFestival.