求修改英文自传语法错误QAQ急非常感谢这是我申请大学要用的今晚就要交了非常感谢QAQ不常用百度知道.我很穷请不要嫌弃悬赏很低Mynameis.;IwasborninMainlandChinainXi’an.Ihaveanordinary
求修改英文自传语法错误QAQ急非常感谢
这是我申请大学要用的今晚就要交了
非常感谢QAQ
不常用百度知道.我很穷请不要嫌弃悬赏很低
Mynameis.;
IwasborninMainlandChinainXi’an.Ihaveanordinarybuthappyfamily,andmyparentsveryloveme.Meanwhile,theroadinmorethantenyearsofschooling,Ialmostnotmetanybigsetbacks.Fromjuniortoseniorhighschool,Ihavemaintainedthehighhonorsintheclass.Ioftenattendvariouswritingcontestandacquiregoodgrades,sinceIamveryinterestedinwriting,actually,asfarasIamconcernedthatthesecompetitionsareverypreciousexperience;theyencouragemetobecomemoreconfidentespeciallywhenIgotgoodgrades.
IalsoperformedverywellinEnglish,andoftengetthefirstinexam.Inmyopinion,myEnglishteacherhashelpedmealotinmyEnglishlearning,theencouragesofhergavemeagreatdealofconfident.Shecananswermyconfusioninthelearningpatiently,andsheoftenlendmetheEnglishmagazineandherfavoritebooks.Throughoutreadingtheseinterestingbooksandmagazines,notonlyletmyEnglishabilitygetsahugeleapandletmelikeEnglishmore,butalsofirmmyconfidencetolearnEnglishbetter.
Inhighschoolthreeyears,IservedasChiefofbooks,classrepresentatives,vicesquadandchemistryclassrepresentative.Thesecadresasexperienceshasthoughtmealot,includinghonedmyabilitytohandlethingsandletmeknowweshouldberesponsible
Idovolunteerserviceinthecommunityregularly,tohelpcleanuptheenvironment.
IvoluntarilyenrolledintheschooltodonatebloodWhensophomore.
IlikeAmericanmovies,becausetheyhasfunnyplotandstunningmotioneffects.Meanwhile,listeningthemusicandsingingarealsomyintegralpartofmylife,whateverEnglish,ChineseorJapanese.Finally,Readingthenovelsaremyfavorite;bytheauthor'sdescription,Icanimmersiveandlearnmanydifferentexotic.