【指出语法之类的错误,再提出能改进、增添、删减的地方~（作文要求：写一篇描写自己家乡的文章）（我的家乡是Guangzhou）Doyouknowwheremyhometownis?Guess!Well,myhometownisinGuangzhou.Guangzhouisafi】

　　指出语法之类的错误,再提出能改进、增添、删减的地方~

　　（作文要求：写一篇描写自己家乡的文章）（我的家乡是Guangzhou）

　　Doyouknowwheremyhometownis?Guess!Well,myhometownisinGuangzhou.Guangzhouisafirst-tiercity,itliesinthesouthofChina.It’salargecitywithapopulationofover13,000,000.

　　There’relotsoflocalsnacksinGuangzhou,suchasWontonnoodlesandRadishbeefoffal.Ifyoucomehere,youshouldhavetry,andyou’lllikeit.It’sdelicious.Besides,there’realsomanyplacesofinterest.Youcannotonlygoandvisitthehistoricalspots,butalsomodernbuildings,CantonToweristhebestchoice.YoucanseethegreatviewofGuangzhouonthecablecarofCantonTower,that’sfantastic.

　　InGuangzhou,thewintersarecold,thoughitwon’tsnow.ButitcanbeburninghotduringthesummerinGuangzhou.

　　Guangzhouisacitywithconvenienttransportationbothonlandandwater.YoucantravelinGuangzhouinanyways,becauseithasdozensofrailways,roadsandsoon.

　　So,cometoGuangzhouandenjoyyourself!

　　另外,本来我想在文章中添加【我对广州恒大】的热爱与支持,后来又觉得有点跑题.

　　（注：这里的【广州恒大】指足球队）