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  英文批改作文塞翁失马的读后感Ibelieveingoodandbadluck.AsIwinmarksix,itisappeartobealottery.Butformeitjustseemsastransientandephemeralasafleetingcloudanunimportantmatter.Whatevermymumuausllytellmedon

  英文批改作文

  塞翁失马的读后感

  Ibelieveingoodandbadluck.AsIwinmarksix,itisappeartobealottery.Butformeitjustseemsastransientandephemeralasafleetingcloudanunimportantmatter.Whatevermymumuausllytellmedon’tbesillytobeliefthatunsafe

  Ithinkthecharacterareluckyofthestory.becausetheirexperienceweregoodsincetobeginwiththeend.Themanlostafinehorseatthetime,buthedidnotdisappointed.heappeartobestaredthroughtheopenwindowsatthecloudsscuttlingpastthesun.Goodluckback,andblackluckcome.Weshouldhaveagreatfulheart.Takeasample,justliketheFinancialTsunami,allofpeoplefacetobeoutofwork.Maybesomeofthemarelostmoney.EveryonefeltfearforFinancialTsunami’scausingsocialproblem.HoweversomeonelucklyfindingajoborstartabusinessinaSlowEconomy.Sowhenwemeetwithpoornews,weshouldnotbediscouraged.Perhaps,badthingturntogoodthing.

  我相信好运与恶运,就像我赢得六合彩(意思是中彩票),这样看起来有点靠运气,但对我而言,这看似过眼烟云的小事。不管什么样我妈妈总是跟我说不要傻傻地相信靠不住的运气

  回答者110.6.99.*,"1"算是一个答案吗?我需要的答案是批改作文,

  而不是阿拉伯数字,

  我觉得故事中主角是幸运的,因为他们从始至终的经历都是好的,当时主角失去一匹好马,但他可没有失望。他看来好像凝视窗外匆匆飘过太阳的浮云。好运去…恶运来。我们应该有平常心,拿一个作比喻,就像金融海潇,许多人面临失业,或者他们失去财富。几乎每个人都怕金融海潇所带来的问题。然而,,有人逆景创业或找到工作,故此每当我们遇到倒霉的事情,我们别气馁,可能恶运转成好运

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2020-05-13 01:49
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胡小唐

  itisappeartobealottery明显的病句嘛!

  becausetheirexperienceweregoodsincetobeginwiththeend还是病句!

  buthedidnotdisappointed同上!

  heappeartobestaredthroughtheopenwindowsatthecloudsscuttlingpastthesu又来了!

  Goodluckback你自己发明的句子?

  Maybesomeofthemarelostmoney病句不是一般的多!

  HoweversomeonelucklyfindingajoborstartabusinessinaSlowEconomy同上!

  badthingturntogoodthing.病句!

  总的评价下吧,绝对是低分!病句多得惨不忍睹,很多句子貌似是中式英语Goodluckback有你这么用的吗?Goodluckcomingback不行吗?动词的单复数时态的运用都很有问题,建议先写一点简单的作文题,尝试一些范文的结构句式,要写塞翁失马这种比较难写的文章还是多打点草稿比较好!

  说的直白,不要见怪!

2020-05-13 01:54:22

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