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  【求四级作文高手看看这篇文章OverseasstudyingInrecentyears,overseasstudyingisverypopular.Moreandmorepeoplegoabroadtostudyforvariousreasons.Whysomanypeoplelikeoverseasstudying?Becasusetherearebetterenvironmentand】

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  OverseasstudyingInrecentyears,overseasstudyingisverypopular.Moreandmorepeoplegoabroadtostudyforvariousreasons.Whysomanypeoplelikeoverseasstudying?Becasusetherearebetterenvironmentandadvancedknowledgeoverseas.Forthisphenomenon,differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.Manypeopleinsistthatgoabroadtostudycanmakethemstudymoreadvancedknowledgeandimprovetheirpracticalability.Ontheotherhand,somepeopleconsiderthattheknowledgeinourcountryisadvancedenough.Inmyopinion,overseasstudyingisbeneficial.Becausestudyingabroadwillmakestudentsgetgreatimprovementintheirsubjects.Anditnotnolyimprovetheirknowledge,butalsotheirpracticalability.Besides,studentscantoughdifferentcustoms.But,ifyoudon'thaveenoughmoneyforoverseasstudying,it'doesn'tmatter.Becausethemostimportantfactorinyourself.

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  1、第十行,goabroadtostudy应该为goingabroadtostudy.2、Manypeopleinsistthatgoabroadtostudycanmakethemstudymoreadvancedknowledge中,study应该为learn.3、Anditnotnolyimprovetheirknowledge,butalsotheirpracticalability.中,应改为:Anditimprovesnotnolytheirknowledge,butalsotheirpracticalability.4、Besides,studentscantoughdifferentcustoms中tough应改为touch5、最后一句Becausethemostimportantfactorinyourself.不知要表达什么,可能漏了is.总体上说,水平一般,没有让人拍案叫绝的地方.中国味道太浓.不过,四级这种水平也能说得过去,不会拉太多得分.我最多最多打9分.

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