请帮我为这篇四级文章+估分帮我看下这篇文章可以多少分.按照总分106.5可以得多少15分制可以多少分?Alongwiththeadvanceofthesociety,moreandmoreproblemsarebroughttoourattention,oneofwhichisthegreen

　　请帮我为这篇四级文章+估分

　　帮我看下这篇文章可以多少分.按照总分106.5可以得多少15分制可以多少分?

　　Alongwiththeadvanceofthesociety,moreandmoreproblemsarebroughttoourattention,oneofwhichisthegreencampus.Therecentreportshowsthatthegreencampusisnotonlygoodforourhealth,butalsoforourstudy.thus,thegreencampusisveryimportantforus.

　　Asweknow,thegreencampusis（写出了be）ontonlymeanstheenvironment,butalsomeansthebehavior,thearea(单词拼错.本想写aura),thecultureandsoon.

　　Consequently,tocreatagreencampus,somemeasuresshouldbetaken.itisahightimewetooksomemeasurestocreatagreencampus.Tobeginwith,weshouldplantmoretreesandlookafterthem.Then,weshouldkeepourshoolyardanddoomsclean.Furthermore,weshouldrespecteachotherbeetweenthefriendsandteachers.Finally,weshouldmakealivelycampus.Weallknowthatanattive(单词拼错想写active)area(单词再次写错aura)canmakeusfeelconfidentandpaymoreattentiontoourstudy.

　　第二段内容似乎不止.有些忘记了

　　知道这个文章写得平平.但还是还各位高手帮我看看.