英语作文批改,请指出语法以及句型错误,还有是否偏题,大学英语4级考试1,目前有不少大学请明星当客座教授2,对这一现象,人们·看法不同3,我的看法HiringcelebritiesasvisitingprofessorsDuringtheseday

　　英语作文批改,请指出语法以及句型错误,还有是否偏题,

　　大学英语4级考试

　　1,目前有不少大学请明星当客座教授

　　2,对这一现象,人们·看法不同

　　3,我的看法

　　Hiringcelebritiesasvisitingprofessors

　　Duringthesedays,Therearesomanyuniversitieswhichinvitehiringcelebritiesasvisitingprofessors.Asahighesteducationalinstitutionofchina,Thisphenomenonhascausedmuchattentionsfromsociety.

　　Somepeoplesayhiringcelebritiesarethepeoplewhoarelikedbystudents.Ifuniversitiesaddthiskindofactivities,Thereisnodoubtuniversitieswillbeaplace

　　whichismoreclosedtostudentslife.Butothersdisagreed,Theyarguedourstudentsshouldlearnknowledgefromuniversities,Nothowbeautifulweareabletobe.

　　Asauniversitystudent,Ithinkinvitinghiringcelebritiesasvisitingprofessorsmaybeabetterway,Butwealsochangealitter,Maybeweshouldpayattentiontothedifficultieswhichhiringcelebritiesmeetandthereownwaytosuccess.Ifwedolikethis,Bothsudentsandadultswillbesatisfied.