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  【逐句分析的追加5-10分,求帮修改作文,写错语法错误需要改正的地方,15分满分能打几分?.准备考四级的食品安全问题令人担忧,你的看法.inrecentyears,thesafetyoffoodhasbroughtintofocus.suchastheSANLU】

  逐句分析的追加5-10分,求帮修改作文,写错语法错误需要改正的地方,15分满分能打几分?.准备考四级的

  食品安全问题令人担忧,你的看法.

  inrecentyears,thesafetyoffoodhasbroughtintofocus.suchastheSANLUmilkpowder,thecrayfish,thedyeingsteamedbreadandtheSHUANGHUIfreshmeat.astheunsafeeventsoffoodoccuringonebyone,peopleareworryaboutthesafetyoffoodfromnowon.

  asfarasiamconcerned,therearemanyreasonsresultinthefoodunsafety.firstofall,mostofbusinessmanarejustconcernedabouttheprofitoftheirproductions.inordertogainthehiggestprofit,theyaddsomeharmfulchemicalsintotheproductions.whatismore,theypreferthelowestpriserawmaterialsratherthanthehighestqualifyone.sotheycantakelessmoneytomakehighestprofit.finally,lackoftheperfectmanagementofgovermentdepartments,sotheunsafeeventsoffoodcanhappenusually.

  consideringthese,ithinkweshouldtakeseriesofmeasurestostopthiskindofeventfromhappening.iputforwardthefollowingsuggestions.foronething,ourgovermentdepartmentsshouldputforwardtheeffectivemeasurestocontrolthiskindofeventhappenagain.foranotherthing,asbusinessmen,wecanjustthinkoftheprofit,wehavearesponsibilitytoensurethesatefyofproductions

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  inrecentyears,thesafetyoffoodhasbroughtintofocus.suchastheSANLUmilkpowder,thecrayfish,thedyeingsteamedbreadandtheSHUANGHUIfreshmeat.astheunsafeeventsoffoodoccuringoneb...

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