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　　请高手修改四级作文,SpringFestivalGalaonCCTV(2006年12月四级真题）1.许多人喜欢在除夕观看春节晚会.2.有些人提出取消春节晚会.3.我的看法.ThecontentofSpringFestivalGalahasbeentheoderoftheday.Thi

　　请高手修改四级作文,

　　SpringFestivalGalaonCCTV(2006年12月四级真题）

　　1.许多人喜欢在除夕观看春节晚会.

　　2.有些人提出取消春节晚会.

　　3.我的看法.

　　ThecontentofSpringFestivalGalahasbeentheoderoftheday.Thisdoesdemonstratethetheory-----manypeopleshaveenjoyedSpringFestivalGalaverymuch.ItisobviousthatwatchingSpringFestivalGalaatNewyear'sevehasbeenatraditionformostpeople.Theythink,thecontentofSpringFestivalisveryinterestingandissuittoeveryone.

　　However,otherpeoplestandonadifferentground.TheysuggestthatSpringFestivalshouldbecanceledbecauseofitalwaysincludesomuchadvertsthatflokshaveadvertsratherthantheperfromance.What'smore,theyconsideritistootedioustowatchthesameactoroneverySpingFestivalGala.

　　Inmystandpoint,weshouldcancelmostofadvertsoftheSpringFestivalGalaandaddmorenewstyleprogramsandnewactors.Inthisway,IdobelievemorepeoplewilpreferSpringFestivalGalaverymuch.

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　　However,otherpeoplestandonadifferentground.TheysuggestthatSpringFestivalshouldbecanceledbecause【of(DELETEit)】italwaysinclude【s】somuchadvertsthatfloks【folk】haveadvertsratherthantheperfromance【performance】.【此句是否生硬?可否改为thatfolksstandadvertsratherthanenjoytheperformance】What'smore,theyconsideritistootedioustowatchthesameactoroneverySpingFestivalGala.

　　Inmystandpoint,weshouldcancelmostofadvertsoftheSpringFestivalGalaandaddmorenewstyleprograms【programsinnewstyles(newstyle为新历之意)】andnewactors.Inthisway,IdobelievemorepeoplewilpreferSpringFestivalGalaverymuch.

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