请帮忙修改英语演讲稿.MyDreamofLife.1、请找出这篇演讲稿的语法错误并加以改正；2、个人认为这篇演讲稿（我自己写的,我是个高二学生,但英语不太好）太中文化,希望可以得到指点,提升档

　　请帮忙修改英语演讲稿.MyDreamofLife.

　　1、请找出这篇演讲稿的语法错误并加以改正；

　　2、个人认为这篇演讲稿（我自己写的,我是个高二学生,但英语不太好）太中文化,希望可以得到指点,提升档次.

　　3、假如你是评审,在听了我的演讲后,你会提出什么问题,我应该如何作答?

　　感激不尽.

　　演讲稿正文如下：

　　MyDreamofLife

　　Goodmorningeveryone!It’smygreatpleasuretospeakhere.I’mgoingtosharemytopicwithyou——mydreamoflife.

　　Thedreamsarelikeflowers,gorgeousandclourful.Thedreamsarealsolikethesunspiritedandvigorous.Soifamanhasadreamthathewillbefullofenergyandgoaheadboldly.

　　SosmallasIam,Ihaveagreatdream.Iwanttobeateacher,andthendevelopethecourseofeducationtoenhancetheknowledgeandmoralspiritsofpeople,Thisismydream,aloftydream.

　　Inmylife,thereisateacherwhohasinfluencedmedeeply.Shehasmademedetermined,positiveandconfident.BeingmyChineseteacher,shehadaccompanyedmefromGrade3toGrade6.Durinethedays,ShealwaysencouragedmewithherloveeverytomeImetsetbacks.WhenImadesomeprogressshewouldalsoremindmetobemodest.ThedaybeforeIwasleavingtheprimaryschool,shesaidtome“YouaresplendidsoIbelievethatyouwillgaingreatsuccess.Besureandbelievethekindnessandmoralsdoalwaysexist.Ihopeyoucandoyourbesttomaketheworldmorebeautiful.”Myteacher’swordsinspiredme,sofromthenon,mydreamcameintobeing.Iamdeterminedtobeateacheranddevelopthecourseofeducationtosowtheseedsofhope.

　　NowIamaseniorhighschoolstudent,eachtimeIchokedontheweightyschoolworkIwouldthinkofmydream,soIcouldcheermyselfuprightaway.Mydreamencouragemetomoveonandinspiremenevergivewp.

　　Inordertoachievemydream,Iwillstudyhardtoperfectmyselfandfaceourlifeactivelyandoptimistically.Asanoldsayinggoes“Allthingscometothosewhowait”.Idobelievethatinthenearfuture,Iwillbeanexcellentteacher.Iwillachievemydream!Yes,Ican!

　　OK!That’sall.Thankyouforlistening.