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  求英语老师帮我作文批改下4级水平的ShoppingOntheInternetNowaday,notonlypeoplehavelesstimeforrelaxingandshopping,butalsobythedevelopingoftheinternet,moreandmorepeoplechoosetogoshoppingontheinternetasitis

  求英语老师帮我作文批改下4级水平的

  ShoppingOntheInternet

  Nowaday,notonlypeoplehavelesstimeforrelaxingandshopping,butalsobythedevelopingoftheinternet,moreandmorepeoplechoosetogoshoppingontheinternetasitisafashionissue.

  Noticeably,shoppingontheinternetmaybedangerous.Onnoaccountcanpeopleignorethatonlywhenwetakethethingonhandwhichwebought,thatwecanknowhowitisreallyworth.Itoftenwastemoneybyshoppingontheinternet.However,withthesharpenoftherule,thephenomenonofcheatingandthedetrimentofshoppingontheinternethasbeenmuchlessthanbefore.Ithasbroughtusconvenience,tosuchadegreeisusinglessmoneyandsavingmoremoneyimportantforus.

  Tomyopinion,theInternetisaproductofcutting-edgetechnology.Shoppingontheinternetalsoacommonissue.Weshouldreceiveandperfectit.

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2020-05-14 18:52
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刘密英

  你作文呢?

2020-05-14 18:56:02
郭均峰

  之前点错了。。之后只有补充提问把作文加上了

2020-05-14 18:58:11
刘密英

  ShoppingOntheInternetWiththedevelopmentoftechnology,moreandmorepeoplechoosetogoshoppingontheInternetasithasbecomeafashionablethingandlesstimeisavailableforpeopletorelax.ShoppingontheInternetcanberisky.Onnoaccountcanpeopleneglectthefactthatonlywhenwereceivethethingsweboughtcanweknowwhatexactlytheirworthis.Besides,itoftencostsalotofinvisiblemoneyandtimebyshoppingontheInternet.However,withtheimplementsofclearerrules,thephenomenonofcheatingandthedetrimentofshoppingontheInternethasbeenmuchlessthanbefore.Ithasbroughtusconveniencetosomedegree,thusenablesustospendlessmoneyonshoppingandtosaveextramoneyincasesomeunexpectedthingshappen.Inmyopinion,theInternetisarepresentativeofthecutting-edgetechnology.ShoppingontheInternethasbecomequitepopularnow.Weshouldconformtothetrendandmakeitbetter.

2020-05-14 19:00:58
郭均峰

  谢谢啊这样逻辑清楚多了。。我现在经常会犯语法错误

2020-05-14 19:01:40
刘密英

  我只是稍微修改了下,不能保证绝对没有语法错误的。四级加油:)

2020-05-14 19:05:23

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