请高手帮忙修改一篇4级作文,并评价指正,Forthispart,youareallowed3ominutestowriteanannouncementtowelcomestudentstojoinaclub.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1本社团的
请高手帮忙修改一篇4级作文,并评价指正,
Forthispart,youareallowed3ominutestowriteanannouncementtowelcomestudentstojoinaclub.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:
1本社团的主要活动内容
2参加本社团的好处
3如何加入本社团
WelcometoOurClub
Hello,guys!Welcometoourclub.OurclubisanEnglishclub,whichwasfounded4yearsago.Inourclub,weregularlyholdsomeEnlishdebatesorcompetitionsopeningfortheclubmembers.WehavealsoorganisedanEnglishcorneronTuesdayeachweek.Onconditionthatyoujoinourclub,youwouldbefacedwithmoreopportunitiesandbenefits.
Inthefirstplace,havingatalkwiththeundergraduateswhocomefromthesameuniversityasyouorwithaforeignteacherwillhelpyoumakegreatprogressinEnglish.Inaddition,bymeansoftalkingwithothers,wecannotonlysharedifferentideasandexperienceswitheachother,butalsoopenupoureyesandmakesomegoodfriends.Lastbutnoleast,havingarelaxingtalkwithothersbringsphysicalandmentalbenefits.Consideringourexhaustingandstressfulcollegelife,atalkenablesustospeakinanopenair,withamoreharmoniousatmosphere.Inthisway,youwouldforgetyourstressandbusyshoolwork.
Inconsequence,IstonglyrecommendthatyoushouldjoinourEnglishclub.Giving10RMB,bringinganapplicationform,andcomewithyourenthusiasmeinlearningEnglish,youwillsucceedinjoiningourclub.Now,it'shightimewetalkedEnglish,let'sgo!