英文段子检查语法错误~Lastyear,myparentsheldaamazingbirthdaypartforme.It’smemorableinmylife.Thereislovetobesurelyfrommyparentsfriends,andallofthem.Actually,IgotmydreamcarbyBMWseven,that’smyfristcarinm

　　英文段子检查语法错误~

　　Lastyear,myparentsheldaamazingbirthdaypartforme.It’smemorableinmylife.Thereislovetobesurelyfrommyparentsfriends,andallofthem.

　　Actually,IgotmydreamcarbyBMWseven,that’smyfristcarinmylife.ThesametimeIgotOmegatoo,sothat’saperfectday.

　　Finally,thatdayeverybodymadedinnertogether,andsaingdancing,soIlearnthatweneedfridshiptosharehappinessandsorrow.Friendshiphelpusunderstandwhoweare,whyweneedeachotherandwhatwecandoforeachother.