【请英语高手帮我点评这篇作文.1各大学开设了各种各样的选修课2学生因为各种原因选择了不同的选修课3以自己为例WhatElectivestoChooseWiththedevelopingofthesociety,thestudentsneedtodevelopthemselves】

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　　1各大学开设了各种各样的选修课

　　2学生因为各种原因选择了不同的选修课

　　3以自己为例

　　WhatElectivestoChoose

　　Withthedevelopingofthesociety,thestudentsneedtodevelopthemselvesineveryaspect,Inordertoletthestudentsfitintotheworldmorequickly,everycollegehasopenedallkindsofelectivesforstudents.Accordingtothesurvey,weknowthat90%studentsareagreedwiththecollegetoopenedtheelectivesforthemtochoose.Thestudentschoosedifferentelectivesbecauseofallkindsofreasons.Somemaychooseexerciseclassbecausetheylikesports.Inordertoimprovetheirhandwriting,somemaychoosecalligraphyclass.Studentsmayalsochoosedanceclassandsoon.Accordingtodifferentstudents'interest,theycanchoosedifferentelectives.Butontheotherhand,sometimesyoumaychoosetheelectivewhichyoudon'tlike.Eachelectiveaskforlimitedstudentssosometimesyoumightlosethechance.

　　Now,I'maGrade2studentatcollege,andIhavechoosemyelectivetwotimes.Becausethereweresomanypeopletochoosetheelectiveatthesametime,ImisstheelectivewhichIinterestinatthattwotimes.Butnomatterwhatelectivewechoose,ifwetryourbesttoit,wocanalsolearnalotofknowledge.