帮忙看下这两篇作文啊!一个满分15,一个满分10~您能给几分?题是:shouldenglishmajorsstudymaths?开头我写nowadaysthesocietyisfacedwithaproblemofwhether"englishmajorsshouldstudymaths?".whichhasarousedheated
帮忙看下这两篇作文啊!一个满分15,一个满分10~您能给几分?
题是:shouldenglishmajorsstudymaths?开头我写nowadaysthesocietyisfacedwithaproblemofwhether"englishmajorsshouldstudymaths?".whichhasarousedheateddiscussion.oppositevoicesarenowrisinginthedebate.somepeoplefirmlyclaimthatenglishmajorsshouldnotstudymaths,whereasothersholdthattheyshouldstudymaths,andthisisalsomypoint.iwouldexploreafewreasonshere.然后中间我写firstandforemost,thereisnodenyingthat...第一个论点是能enrichknowledge.然后我写inaddition,第二个论点是,usefulinourdailylife比如说买东西时,很实用,很practical最后用lastbutnottheleastimportant,第三个论点是可以锻炼逻辑思维.其中我用了一些简单的句型.比如itisabsolutelyessentialthat啊facedwithproblems,students...怎么样怎么样啊,然后用onlyinthisway啊可能还有一些~然后用一些常用连接词,比如therefore,cosequently,furthermore等,结尾写的是:tosumup,takingintoaccountofallthesefactors,wemayconfidentlycometotheconclusionthat...我英语一般,没用什么高级词汇...
这是一便条写作,说你要考试没时间去车站接朋友,你让班里某某去帮忙接,要说一下他大概什么样~要是我说:iamwritingtoshowmyapologyfornotbeingabletomeetyouattherailwaystation.iknowthatyoumustbefeelingunhahappyaboutit.thefactisthatihavetoprepareformyexam.ihaveaskedmyclassmateemmatomeetyouattherailwaystation.sheisatallgirlandwearsglasses.isincerelyhopeyoucanforgiveme.lookingforwardtomeetingyou.