【请大家帮我修改一下这些英语表述!请大家帮我改改,写的很散.请大家指出其中的语法错误、用词不当、表述不清等等的地方,告诉我怎么改,谢谢!1.Whydoyouchoosetostudyatourinstitute?Therearesever】

　　请大家帮我修改一下这些英语表述!

　　请大家帮我改改,写的很散.请大家指出其中的语法错误、用词不当、表述不清等等的地方,告诉我怎么改,谢谢!

　　1.Whydoyouchoosetostudyatourinstitute?

　　Thereareseveralreasons.

　　First,Istronglywanttostudyfurtherbecauseafterfouryears’work,Ifeltthatmyknowledgehasbeenoldandnotenoughanymore,Imustkeeponstudingtoadapttotheneedofsociety.SoIdecidetotakepartintheEntranceExamanationofPostgraduate.

　　Second,BeijingLanguageandCultureUniversityisverygood.Shehasnicecampuscircumstance,manyhigh-levelpostgraduatetutorsandmanysignificantresearchtasks.Alltheseaspectsattractmetoentertheuniversitytofurtherstudy.IbelieveIcanimprovemyselfverymuchafterthreeyears’study.

　　Thirdly,Ilearntalotfrommyjobduringthepastfouryears.However,Ithinkfurtherstudyisstillurgentformetorealizeself-value.Lifeisprecious.Itisnecessarytoseizeanychanceforself-development,especiallyinthiscompetitivemodernworld.Inaword,Iamlookingforwardtomakingasolidfoundationforfutureprofessionafterthreeyears’studyhere.

　　2.Whydoyouwanttogobacktostudyinsteadofgoingonwithyourwork?

　　Ilearntalotfrommyjobduringthepastfouryears.Butmyfoundationisstillfairlyweak,andifIdon’tenhancemyselfbyfurtherstudyingnow,Iwillmustlagbehindthesocietyinlaterwork.So,Ithinkfurtherstudyisurgentforme.Lifeisprecious.Itisnecessarytoseizeanychanceforself-development,especiallyinthiscompetitivemodernworld.Inaword,Iamlookingforwardtomakingasolidfoundationforfutureprofessionafterthreeyears’studyhere.

　　3.Whatdoyouexpecttoachieveduringyourstudyifyouareenrolledintothisinstitute?

　　IfI’msolucilytobeenrolledintoBeijingLanguageandCultureUniversity,Iwillcherishthestudychanceverymuch.Myplanis:First,IhopeIcanformsystematicviewofClassicalChineseLiterature.Myexpresswishistogetacompletecomprehensionoftheformationanddevelopmentofthesubject.Ifpossible,Iwillgoonwithmystudyfordoctoratedegree.AsforEnglishstudy,IwillpaymoreattentiontomyoralEnglish,IwillcommunicatewithforeignfriendstoimprovemyEnglishability.IwilltrytolearndecentEnglish.