留学个人陈述的开头应该怎样写呀?MyMyanmarnameisWittYee,ChianesenameisXuHuanandfromChain.I’m22yearsold,andmydateofbirthis29July1991.Iamauniversitystudent,graduatedfromBaoshanUniversity,YunNanprovince,in2

　　留学个人陈述的开头应该怎样写呀?

　　MyMyanmarnameisWittYee,ChianesenameisXuHuanandfromChain.I’m22yearsold,andmydateofbirthis29July1991.Iamauniversitystudent,graduatedfromBaoshanUniversity,YunNanprovince,in2013.IamstillstudyinginBaoshanUniversitynow.Recently,Ihaveadreamtostudyabroad.ThenIsearchonlineandfindthatitismoreconvenientandsuitableformetogotoMyanmarforstudy.

　　我这样写了一段,谁能帮我改改,或者再加点什么,好像不怎么好.到底要不要把自己的名字写上呀?还是怎样呀?急死我了.个人陈述的格式也不知道,