哪位英语高人能帮我检查一下这篇电邮这是我写给帮我申请暑期实习的一个远亲的邮件,我们之间不是太熟,对方比我大,已工作,是外资企业的白领.我主要想催问一下实习的事怎么说,成了没,还

　　哪位英语高人能帮我检查一下这篇电邮

　　这是我写给帮我申请暑期实习的一个远亲的邮件,我们之间不是太熟,对方比我大,已工作,是外资企业的白领.我主要想催问一下实习的事怎么说,成了没,还有表达一下即使不成也没关系.希望各位英语达人能帮我检查一下英语表达和内容是否得体,不要表现的我太幼稚.希望大家认真看看,

　　HiXXX

　　It'sJulyandI'minmysummervacationinNJnow.Howareyou?

　　Myvacationlastsabout2monthstill27th,Augustandbesidesgettinganintership,IalsowouldliketotakesomeGermanyclasseswhichcouldlastforamonth.ThereforeIwouldappreciateitifyoucantellmehowisthecasegoingandthegeneraltimeoftheintershipsoIcanarrangemytime.

　　However,ifmyapplicationisrejectedortheredoesn'tseemtobeachancethistime,It'llbeOK,asthemostimportantthingtomeislearningmorewhereverIam.Iwilltrytofindmyselfapart-timejobinNJ.

　　Bytheway,takecareofyourselfduringthehotsummer.

　　Lookingforwardtoyourfeedback.

　　Haveaniceday.

　　XXX