有关服装外贸的翻译,急需!分数不是很多,但是希望能帮帮我!Pls.seebelow&attachfor1stprotocommentsandarrangetoproceedthe2ndproto(2pcs)asap,thanks!Sinceheresomanyfittingproblemonit,andweaskthecustomeri

　　有关服装外贸的翻译,急需!分数不是很多,但是希望能帮帮我!

　　Pls.seebelow&attachfor1stprotocommentsandarrangetoproceedthe2ndproto(2pcs)asap,thanks!

　　Sinceheresomanyfittingproblemonit,andweaskthecustomeriftheycansendpaperpatternagainfordoublechecking,willkeepyoupost!

　　Design:

　　NotApproved

　　Comment:

　　2ndVivi2153111131

　　Thankyoufor1stproto.

　　Plsfollowcommentsbelowandplsproceedwth2ndproto:

　　Plsnotewefinditreallyhardtorecognizethepatternwesent.Fitisbadonprotoanditisn´tatoriginalmadefromsamepattern.Iwonderwhathappen?

　　Anywayplsfollowcommentsbelowcarefully:

　　1.Plsnotefitbalanceisreallybad..bothfrontandbackispointingout.

　　Plsseephoto1and2

　　2.Plscorrectfitbalance.

　　Itseamtomethatfrontlengthismissingatshoulder=moreshlslantingatfront,tomakefrontfallingdownstraight.Plsadviseaccordingtopattern

　　Backispointingout..plsavoidandplsadviseaccordingtopattern

　　Plsalsonotebulkingatback.Plsavoidbulking

　　Bothaboveissuesarenotaproblematoriginalfollowingpatternsent!

　　3.Thensleevefit/sleevesewingistoobad.Plsseephoto5and6

　　Photo5oforiginal,withanicesleeveand

　　photo6ofproto,withabadsleeve.

　　Plsimprovesleeve

　　4.Plsmakeshoulderacross39cm

　　5.Plsreducesleevelengthby4cm

　　6.Plsreshapesleeveheadatbackaccordingtophoto7.Atcutlines..plsremove1.3cmandplsreshape

　　7.Plsmake½uppersleevewidth=16cm,tofolloworiginal/pattern(protohasan½uppersleeveon17,5cm)

　　8.Plsaddsleeveheadpad/roll,formoretailoredlook

　　9.Plsnotewefoundshoulderpadtoosoft..plsuseoneabitharderformorestiffhold

　　10.Plsmakecollarlapelsymmetric.Rightisnice..leftisnot.Plsimprove

　　11.Plsmakecollar/lapelnicely..inshape,sharplinesandinsewing

　　12.Regardingcollar/lapel:

　　Plsreducecollarpointby1cm

　　Plsreducelapelwidthby0,5cmand

　　Plsmovecutline0,5cmin

　　Plsseephoto8

　　13.Plsremovedartundercollar