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  这篇文章是英语的到现在也难评价.谁能评价就是大学生博士生.请评价他的单词和每句话,尽量写60个文字YesterdayOnceMoreIhavebeenaCarpenter'sfansinceIwasabout12yearsold.IfirstheardTopoftheWorldi

  这篇文章是英语的到现在也难评价.谁能评价就是大学生博士生.请评价他的单词和每句话,尽量写60个文字

  YesterdayOnceMore

  IhavebeenaCarpenter'sfansinceIwasabout12yearsold.IfirstheardTopoftheWorldinmyaunt'scar,andthatwasit.Iwashooked.Iwasandstillamamazedbythesongsandthatvoice.Thetalentthatcomesacrossineachsongisjustamazing.NotadaygoesbythatIdon'tlistentooneoftheirCDs.TheCarpenter'swilloutlastalloftherestandareirreplacable!ThankyouRichardandKarenforgivingthewholeworldthebestthatthemusicworldwilleverhear.

  IwouldliketostartbysayinghowmuchKaren&Richardhaveinfluencedalotofthingsinmylifeinmanydifferentways.

  Theybothhavesuchamazingtalents,howcanyoudescribeinonesentencejusthowwonderfultheyare

  WhatmadetheCarpentersmusicsospecial,andraisesitabovetheearlier-mentioned'70sduoswasthatbeneaththesmilingsheenoftheCapenterssqueakycleanimage,theirtoothygrinsandmatchingsweaters,KarenCarpenterwasbattlingpainandlonelinessthathervoicecoudn'thide.

  Afanoncesighedwithemotion,"Hersongsareheavenlyandhertalentforsongwritingisrareinthisworld."Wouldyouagree?

  评价这篇文章原因:在我读高一的时候因为看到一个同学小小日记,被女英语老师(27岁)鼓励.我看到,我这个人也很想被英语老师评价鼓励.所以就在我一本英语书.看一段就抄一段.拼成下面这篇文章--YesterdayOnceMore--也写日记给英语老师.我不懂英语,这文章是4个外国人写的.那本书有翻译.我写了这英语文章.那女英语老师上课,第一次叫我我记得很清楚.喊我座位号,我起来sorry,我下去.喊我名字,我说sorry.天天叫我回答问题.只要是她的课.在高一的时候叫我不下50次~几乎一个星期7节英语课,他都叫我上来,我都说sorry,.我开始害怕-到高一的时候还叫我.最后一次叫我去讲台跟他讨论一张地图.我不去.说sorry.他教了过3个星期就走了.换个男英语老师.我不上到讲台跟他讨论地图,她就从此不叫同学回答问题!我感觉自己有罪!

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2020-05-15 19:14
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郭大海

  那么,我想试试看:

  这篇文章是非常精辟的,文章提到,作者在12岁时就迷上了卡朋特,“Iwashooked”简单的三个单词,就可见对其之喜爱.句“NotadaygoesbythatIdon'tlistentooneoftheirCDs.”无一日不听,可见其痴迷的痴迷程度.时光易逝,可句“Iwasandstillamamazedbythesongsandthatvoice.Thetalentthatcomesacrossineachsongisjustamazing.”中的“still”与“amazing”表明作者仍对其非常喜爱.“irreplacable”与句“ThankyouRichardandKarenforgivingthewholeworldthebestthatthemusicworldwilleverhear”.则是作者对卡朋特至高无上的肯定:这是最棒的,无可取代的.句“IwouldliketostartbysayinghowmuchKaren&Richardhaveinfluencedalotofthingsinmylifeinmanydifferentways.”说明卡朋特的音乐已经融入作者的生命中.

  “Theybothhavesuchamazingtalents,howcanyoudescribeinonesentencejusthowwonderfultheyare!”则是作者的惊叹,他认为怎能用一句话就表达出卡朋特兄妹的“wonderful”!

  句“WhatmadetheCarpentersmusicsospecial,andraisesitabovetheearlier-mentioned'70sduoswasthatbeneaththesmilingsheenoftheCapenterssqueakycleanimage,theirtoothygrinsandmatchingsweaters,KarenCarpenterwasbattlingpainandlonelinessthathervoicecoudn'thide.”是本文中最长的一句话,它是对卡朋特介绍,写得朴实而不失光彩.

  句“Afanoncesighedwithemotion,"Hersongsareheavenlyandhertalentforsongwritingisrareinthisworld."其中heavenly是神圣的意思,写出了卡朋特的音乐之不可亵渎与历经年代,却经久不衰的光芒.”Wouldyouagree?则很好的起到了互动的作用,增强渲染力!

  本人只是初一学生,60字自己并没怎么算过,不好就删一些呗,基本每句和一些重点词都点评了,求采纳,熬出这篇文章很不容易啊!拜托作者采纳吧!

2020-05-15 19:18:43

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