Dreams,
weallhaveadreaminsideus,moreorless.Ithinkthemostimportantfactor
inrealizingone’sdreamsisexperience.Aswegrowup,weareexposetomany
things,joy,success,stressandlotmore.Whenwearelittle,wealwayslive
inuncertain.Wearescareofthefuture,weareafraidoftheunknown.
However,whenwefinallygrowupandgothrough
allsortsofjoysandsorrowsoflife,wewouldfind
outwhatwetrulywantedinsideus.Notjustanactonimpulsebutadecisionthat
wemakeandwewouldtakeresponsibilityof.Therefore,Ithinkexperienceis
thekeyfactortoknowwhatone’sdreamare.
LikeIsaidinthefirstparagraph,experienceiswhatmakeusgrow.Ithinkpart-timejobsisanopportunityforustoexposetothesocietyandtogainexperience.Wecanlearnmanythingsfrompart-timejobs.Therearethingsweareabletogetfrompart-timejobsthatwecan'tgetitfromanywhereelse.
Towardfailure,Ithinkthisissomethingweallgothroughbefore.Itisalwayssaidthat"failureisthemotherofsuccess".Ithinkfailurewouldmakeusmature.Aswegrowup,welearnedandoftenfromfailures.Welearnfromwhatwedidwrongandtrytodobetterthenexttime.Therefore,Ithinkifwecanovercomefailure,seefailureasamotivatetodobetterthenfailurewouldbeasteppingstoneofoursuccess.
可能长了点,你自己减吧.(ps:语法可能有点问题)