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  【并写一下小评语,感激不尽,Ihaveafriendwhowasmyclassmate.Herfatherisapliceman.Soherfatheralwaysnotathome,her.mothertakesherseriously.Shealwayssignedandtoldmethatshehadabadluck.Iaskedthereason.shetoldmethat】

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  Ihaveafriendwhowasmyclassmate.Herfatherisapliceman.Soherfatheralwaysnotathome,her.mothertakesherseriously.

  Shealwayssignedandtoldmethatshehadabadluck.Iaskedthereason.shetoldmethathermotheristooserioustolimither,shecan'tplaycomputer,cellphoneandreadyouthnovel.shecan'tgooutonweekends.ifsomeonecalledher,hermotherwouldaskhim/herabouthis/herscoreandfamily.Tworstthingashermotherwouldcheckherbagandroomwithoutherperimt.Allthethingshermotherdonemadeherfeltashamedandsorrowful.Shethoughtthatshewasoldenoughtodealwithherlifebuthermotherforbidden.Shethoughtitwasabadlucktohavesuchamother.

  "Youaresolucky,yourparentswouldnotforceyoutodoanything,theyrespectyouropinionsandwouldnotcheckyourbagandroom,theygivesyouyourprivatespace.Itistruth,Ihadnoideatocomforther."Iwanttohavesuchparents,too!"Atthatmoment,Ithoughtaboutmyfamily.EverydayIbackhome,myfatherwouldwaitformeatdoorway,momhasprepareaverydeliciousdinner.Howwarmitis.Ilookedintohereyes.Ontheonehand,Ithoughthermotherislovinghersomuchthatcannotcontrolherconcern.Iaskedher,"whynotthinkaboutreasonyourmotherdonethese?""why?"Shewasconfused."Becauseoflove",shewasshockedandseemedlikecan'tbelieveit."ButIdon'tthinksheusedarightway.Maybeyoucantalktoher,makeherknowmoreaboutyouandrealizeyou'reaadult."Isaid."Comparewithsomeorphans,youraresolucky."Igaveherwordbackandsmiled.

  Whenwearebornintoworld,wearebeloved.Eveniforphans,theyhavechoicestoloveandtobeloved.Soluckyweare.Inmyopinion,"luck"justaword.Itdependsonmymind.

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2020-05-16 12:44
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  开头第一句用的是was,所以文章基本上除了引号内的话不改,所有的现在时都要改成过去式.第一行always前后缺少谓语.第三行too...to表示太而不能,所以里面不是用的limit而是permit.第五行最好用outside,goout现在流行翻...

2020-05-16 12:47:35

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