要用英语作自我介绍,帮忙看下有无语法问题.Hello!MynameisTony,IgraduatedfromBaochuPagodaExperimentalSchoolHangzhou.Asmanystudents(要不要加do?),myfavoritesportsisswim,Ilikeswimminginthewaterlikeafish.Also,li

　　要用英语作自我介绍,帮忙看下有无语法问题.Hello!MynameisTony,Ig

　　raduatedfromBaochuPagodaExperimentalSchoolHangzhou.Asmanystudents(要不要加do?),myfavoritesportsisswim,Ilikeswimminginthewaterlikeafish.Also,listeningtomusicismyfavoritetoo,Ilikethesongswhichmakemerelaxed.However,Iamnotaveryoutgoingperson.Ilikedoingthingsalone(此处应该如何表达?).Iamgladtobeyourclassmate,andIamwillingtomakefriendwithyou,Iamsurewewillhaveanicetimeinthecomingschoolyear!

　　Thanks!