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  请高人帮我检查下语法问题Myhometownisfamousfortwoworldheritage,oneisDujiangyanirrigationsystemwhichisuniqueandascientificmarvelinwaterworkconstructionofancientChina,Builtover2300yearsagobyalocalofficialat

  请高人帮我检查下语法问题

  Myhometownisfamousfortwoworldheritage,oneisDujiangyanirrigationsystemwhichisuniqueandascientificmarvelinwaterworkconstructionofancientChina,Builtover2300yearsagobyalocalofficialatthattimenamedLiBing,thesystemstillcontrolsthewatersoftheMinjiangRiveranddistributesittothefertilefarmlandoftheChengduplains.AsaresulttheChengduPlainhasbeenfreeoffloodingandthepeoplehavebeenlivingpeacefullyandaffluently,nowtheprojectishonoredasthe“treasureofSichuan”

  TheotheroneistheMt.Qingcheng,knownasthefifthamongthemostfamousTaoismMountainsinChina,istheplacewheretheTaoismcameintobeing,ThetemplesofMountQingchengarecloselyassociatedwiththefoundationofTaoism,oneofthemostinfluentialreligionsofEastAsiaoveralongperiodofhistory.

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2020-05-16 16:59
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郭建华

  第四行:water有复数吗?

  "TheotheroneistheMt.Qingcheng,knownasthefifthamongthemostfamousTaoismMountainsinChina,istheplacewheretheTaoismcameintobeing."我觉得应该为:

  “TheotheroneisMt.Qingcheng,knownasthefifthoftherankofthemostfamousTaoismMountainsinChian,whichistheplacetheTaoismcameintobeing.”

  "oneofthemostinfluentialreligionsofEastAsiaoveralongperiodofhistory"前应加“whichis”不然指代不清

  鉴于本人水平有限,以上均为本人感觉而得之意见,若有错误还请见谅;若还有其他错误,那就拜托其他网友了

2020-05-16 17:04:05

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