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  把我改作文:Greatchangesinmyhometown个位英语高手给个分数,然后把我改一下,本人高三(不好意思水平很烂,在冲刺阶段,英语更加要充实)GreatchangesinmyhometownIrememberwhenIwasachild,myhometown

  把我改作文:Greatchangesinmyhometown

  个位英语高手给个分数,然后把我改一下,本人高三(不好意思水平很烂,在冲刺阶段,英语更加要充实)

  Greatchangesinmyhometown

  IrememberwhenIwasachild,myhometownwasonlyasmallcity,Andthefieldswerenotfarfrommyhome.Soifyouwanttihaveagoodbreath,youcouldwalktothatfieldsforhavingagoodbreath.

  Now,about15yearsago,myhometownhasgreatchanges.Forexample:everyfieldswerechangedintothebigbuildings,andtherearemoreandmorecarsacrossonthestreethereandthere.Butifyouwanttorelaxandhaveagoodbreath,you’dbettertofindthefieldsfromthecityedge..

  I’mpleasedtohavethisdevelopedhometown,butI’llneverforgetthehomewhichwascleanandbeautbeforethen.

  一定要先给个分数,我估一下我月考的分数!谢谢!

  总分就是15分!

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2020-05-19 00:45
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刘福君

  你的作文3处较严重语法错误,字写错了2个,标点大小写错误4处,内容有待充实.第一项最多8分,第二项最多12-3-6x0.5=6,这样14分左右.(声明:我没干过老师,看下面的标准来评的,仅供参考)高考作文评分标准:=======...

2020-05-19 00:47:16

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