帮看看作文哪里错误Safetyisveryimportanttoeveryone.First,IadviseMiddleschoolstudentsandpupilsfollowthetrafficrulesanddon'truntheredlight.Becauseeveryyearhavemanypeoplearekilledinthetrafficaccident.Second,don't

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　　Safetyisveryimportanttoeveryone.First,IadviseMiddleschoolstudentsandpupilsfollowthetrafficrulesanddon'truntheredlight.Becauseeveryyearhavemanypeoplearekilledinthetrafficaccident.Second,don'teatjunkfood,itisbadforourbodies.Ifyoueatjunkfoodtoomuch,maybeyouwillfallill.Inordertoyourhealth,youdbettereathealthyfood.Third,Ithinkstudentsshoulddoexerciseeveryday,Butbecarefulnottohurtyourself.

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