首段

　　①Asisapparentlybetrayedinthedrawingsabove,描述图画②Themoststrikingfeatureis(图画重点信息)

　　③Thereisnodoubtthatitssymbolicmeaningsubtlyconveyedshouldbegivendeepconsideration.二段①Asissymbolicallyrevealedinthesetofdrawings,thefeatthat(重复上面图画信息)．Profoundlyindicatesthat主

　　题ismomentousandfundamentaltoanyonewhoundertakesgreatdeeds.

　　②Undoubtedly,Itis主题thatkeepsuscontinuallydoingsomethingvaluableandadmirableinspiteofdifficulty,that

　　makesusstillfullofenergytofacethecomingchallengesandcompetitionandthatoffersusthefoundationforthecomingsuccess.③AsfarasIamconcerned,thereareseveraladvantagesthatcanbegivenasbelow.④Initially,nothingismorebeneficialthan主题toovercomeourdefectsandimproveourefficiency.⑤Onanotherlevel,noissueisasgoodas主题tomakeourlifemorecolorfulandenergetic.⑥Nobetterillustrationofthisideacanbethoughtthantheexamplementionedbelow.⑦Apersonwhois(…)willmakeamessjustbecausenoonecanbeproficientinallthethings.⑧Onlyby(……)canyouputyourcapacitiesintofullplayandcanyoubethewinnerinthesociety.三段

　　①Fromwhathavebeendiscussedabove,itadmitsofnodoubtthatindoingthingswhethergreatorsmallthereare

　　moreorlessdifficulties,itismuchbetterforonetoinvolveyourselfintoa主题.②However,itiseasiersaidthandone,practiceisthemostimportantfactor.③Onlywhenyoupayattentiontoitcanyoumakeitbettersoonerorlater.

　　消极型、批判危害性的框架

　　首段.①Asisapparentlybetrayedinthedrawingsabove,图画内容,whichseemstobehumorous/ridiculous/……(可改)butthought-provokingonsecondthoughts.②Themoststrikingfeaturethatimpressesmedeeplyisthatunbelievably,图画意义所指.③Recentfewyearshaswitnessedaphenomenonof主题whichseemstobedisastroustoindividualsurvivalandprosperity.（可改）④Thisphenomenonof主题shouldbecondemnedseverelyormadeillegal.

　　⑤Thereisnodoubtthatitssymbolicmeaningsubtlyconveyedshouldbegivendeepconsideration.第二段

　　①Toaccountfortheabove-mentionedphenomenon,severalseriouseffectshavebeenputforward.②Initially,主题notonlyresultsdoesharmtoourphysicalandmentalhealthbutalsoresultsinafrustratingandhumiliatinglife.③Onanotherlevel,nothingismoreharmfulthan主题tocontradictwithaharmonioussociety.④Nobetterillustrationofthisideacanbethoughtthantheexamplementionedbelow.⑤(可改)AccordingtoasurveymadebyChinaDaily,63.9%of(大群)whohaveeverexperienced主题willliveadull

　　lifeorevenfeellessofhopeaboutthefuture.

　　⑥Ifwecannottakeusefulmeans,wemaynotcontrolthistrend,andsomeundesirableresultsmaycomeout

　　unexpectedly,wewillseethegloomyfutureof(something).第三段①Fromwhathavebeendiscussedabove,itistherefore,necessarythatsomeeffectivemeasuresaretakentoprevent主

　　题中之问题.

　　②Ononehand,weshouldbesensibletostrengthentheenforcementofthelawstoprotect(something).③Ontheotherhand,itisdemandingforustokeeppeopleawareoftheimportanceofsavingsomebodyoutoftheevil

　　handsofdestruction.④However,itiseasiersaidthandone.Practiceisthemostimportantfactor.

　　⑤Althoughthefightagainstitislong-standingandtremendousone,oureffortswilleventuallypayoff.⑥Onlywhenyouattentiontoitcanyous