ThesecomicpiecesveryclearlypresentedaninterestingexperimentaboutDNA.Everycartooncharactershavetheirowncharacteristicsthatareeasyforreaderstomakedistinguishbetweenandleftdeepimpressionsonthem.EspeciallyCharaff,theprotagonist,hismovesandfacialexpressionsarequiterichandinteresting.Theauthorwellgraspedthedetailsofeachcharacters,forexample,themoveoffingersbeingverymatchedtothewholestory.Thisreflectsthattheauthorisverycarefulwhendrawing.

　　Theorderofstructureofthestorytellingisindeedgood.Frombriefingbackgroundandmakingexperimentalhypothesistofinallyexposingimpactsofthewholeexperiment,itclealyexplainedallstepsnecessarytotheexperiment,meawhilethewordingusedindescribingeachpieceofthecartoonisofsimpleonesthatallowreaderswhohaveevernoanyscientificbackgroundtogetafastunderstanding.

　　Anotherfeaturethroughallthesedrawsisthecolorusedareverybrightandattactive,whichenticesreaderstoreadon.

　　However,therearedrawbackswiththethesedrawsofart.Atfirst,itwouldbebetterinsteadofgivingtoomanytextforexplainationappearedinseveralpieces,byusingimagizedlanguageratherthanusingtextannotationstoexpressspecificviewpointsbecauseextratextmayletreadersfeeltheyarejustreadingabookratherthanaworkofcomic.Readingcomic,fortheiroriginaldemarcation,shouldbemorefannyandpleasantthanreadingabook.

　　Theseconddrawbackiswiththe10thand11thpiecesthroughwhichreaderscann’tcatchupwithwhatviewpointispresented.Readershavetorelyonreadingtexttounderstandthethoughtoftheauthor.WhatImeanisthatthetextandfigureswerenotcombinedsowellasexpected.

　　FinallyIthinkitwouldbehelpfultoaddprofilesofthecharactersinthestorywhichmayallowreaderstoquicklyunderstandthewholeexperiment.