Itismoreimportanttochoosefriendsthatcanhavefunwithyouthantochoosefriendsthatwillhelpyouwhenyouneedthem.(其实按照整篇来看,作者要选的是能帮你的朋友而不是酒肉朋友,所以开头的这句话,顺序错了,应该为Itismoreimportanttochoosefriendswhocanhelpyououtwhenyouareintroublethanthosecanonlyhavefunwithyou.)

　　One’slifecan’tbedepartedwithfriends.Butasfortheproblem（个人推荐用Point）tochose(Chose应改成Choose,可能是拼写错误)whichtypeoffriends,

　　thosehavefunwithyouarethosewhohelpyouwhenyouneed,everyonehavea

　　differentchoose（Choose应该改成Choice.Haveachoice是一个搭配.Choose是动词不能做名词）.Personally,Ipreferthelatterone.

　　Actually,

　　thosewhowillonlymakeyourlaughmusthaveapropose（Propose是Verb,可能是拼写错误,可能作者想拼成purpose.purpose:企图,目的）.Usually,theywantto

　　obtain（建议用get,Obtain一般指通过努力得到好的东西,词性带褒义.可用Get,中性色彩）somethingfromyou.Forexample,myaunt,Jane,oncehadafriendthat

　　alwaysmakeherhappywhenshewassingle.Healwaysgavemyauntlotsofpresentsorgotravelwithmy

　　aunt.Myauntwaspleased,andstartedtothinkaboutmarryhim.However,when

　　myauntlostpartofherfortune,(shewasquitewealthybefore)themanleft

　　herwithoutsayingaword.Wecanfindthistypeofstoriesonthenewspaper

　　everyday,whenwemeetthosewhowoulddonothingbutonlyhavefunwithyou,but

　　leaveyouorfindanexcusewhenyouaskforhelp,weshouldn’tbetheir

　　friends.

　　Second,Ihaveto

　　saythattruefriendwillnotalwayspleaseyou.Forexample,inthebookEmma,

　　Mr.knightlyisEmmatruefriend,butheoftentoldEmmahershortpoints.Such

　　asafterEmmalaughedotherpeopleatthepicnic,Mr.Knightlytoldhershewas

　　tooproud,thatmadeEmmaquietangry.But,duetoMr.knightlyunwelcome

　　words,Emmahavechangedtoabettergirl.Thatistosay,friendswhoalwayshave

　　funwithyou,appreciateyouorpleaseyou,arenotallyourtruefriends.Instead,

　　thatareevenbadforyou.

　　Inaddition,as

　　theproverbruns,thosewhohelpyouareyourtruefriends.Really,friendsare

　　thosewhocareaboutyou,andgiveyouahandorundergothetroublewithyou.

　　Certainly,weshouldchoosethentobeourfriend.

　　So,inshort,Certainly,weshouldchoose

　　themtobeourfriendinsteadofthosewhocanonlymakeyoufeelhappy.andIwouldtoso.

　　在煲汤还没看完待会继续!有层次,思路很清晰.不错哦!