求批阅初三英语作文amemberof___我填的是shanghaiAsWeallknow,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinshanghai.Shanghaiisbecomingmoreandmoreinternational,soIamgladtobecomeamemberofshanghaianditismyfavourthatIamasha

　　求批阅初三英语作文

　　amemberof___我填的是shanghaiAsWeallknow,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinshanghai.Shanghaiisbecomingmoreandmoreinternational,soIamgladtobecomeamemberofshanghaianditismyfavourthatIamashanghainese.IamaordinarystudentinShanghaiWhodoescommonthings,Suchasfriendlytoforeigners,pickinguptherubbish.Thoughthesethingsarereallytiny,Istillthinktheyareimportanttomakeourcitymorebeautiful.Inmyopinion,IfeelexcitedandproudtobeamemberofShanghai

　　因为是手机打的,标点大小写别指出了,

　　suchas之后还有个andsoon主要是语法错误请尽量提出。结构是浮云。18分14分有？